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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait to see were you are going to go with this
Please post the next chapter soon.
I am begging with puppy eyes.
I really love the idea of this fic.
Please post the next chapter soon.
I am begging with puppy eyes.
I really love the idea of this fic.
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh more great work!
sorry i havnt been reviewing everychapter like usual i have just been a little bit behind on my reiviewing...got a few bad replies and i was only trying to help...sheesh
anyways sorry to hear school is slowing you down but you have to do what you have to do. Dont let our eager anticipation draw you off track XD
Anyways i REALLY really look forward to the next installation and please please please i pray its soon (ahh the glory days of two sometimes three updates a day) im glad that she has decided to chase her desires instead of giving up.
And BTW i thought the fight scene was amazing but i dont really understand why she was fired...maybe they thought she was too unstable? maybe some clarification although im sure you had already planned on elaboration.
Anyways! BONZAI! you have done a wonderful job!
Looking forward to more
Happy writing
Krickets/krickitat NSI
sorry i havnt been reviewing everychapter like usual i have just been a little bit behind on my reiviewing...got a few bad replies and i was only trying to help...sheesh
anyways sorry to hear school is slowing you down but you have to do what you have to do. Dont let our eager anticipation draw you off track XD
Anyways i REALLY really look forward to the next installation and please please please i pray its soon (ahh the glory days of two sometimes three updates a day) im glad that she has decided to chase her desires instead of giving up.
And BTW i thought the fight scene was amazing but i dont really understand why she was fired...maybe they thought she was too unstable? maybe some clarification although im sure you had already planned on elaboration.
Anyways! BONZAI! you have done a wonderful job!
Looking forward to more
Happy writing
Krickets/krickitat NSI
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that last chapter could not have been more depressing
totally angsty
but i guess it works. You do have this going an interesting direction
totally angsty
but i guess it works. You do have this going an interesting direction
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...who's point of view are we in? Sakura's? Because you keep mentioning another Sakura.... And if it is Sakura, why would she be fired from being a shinobi because she took out an ANBU? Sure she'd get in trouble, but it seems like it would make her look more promising as a ninja. And is Sakura not being trained by Tsunade? Yeah...bit confused.
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
She's really evolving. I'm starting to feel empathy for her. Strange isn't it. Before, I was enjoyign her brashly honest commentary and the bizzaire relationship between her and Ibiki. These last few chapters have really started fleshing her out and giveing her more detail and depth.
I'm still not sure of what to think of her as a mother though. I haven't really seen her interact with any of these kids.
Still, I would also like to see her get reacquainted with Ibiki. I want ot see what he's been doign through all of this.
I'm still not sure of what to think of her as a mother though. I haven't really seen her interact with any of these kids.
Still, I would also like to see her get reacquainted with Ibiki. I want ot see what he's been doign through all of this.
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice story, i like how you write, and i suck at writing reviews. but is this the last chapter, i hope not.
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated! She is so right, an angry Shino is extremely hot. Nice twist, I definately wasn't expecting it.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! What happened to the regular updates? Please don't say you've given up on it!
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH! i just cant wait to see what happens!
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still this is an awesome story. I dont know how you mangae to come up with these things and then on top of that still have Ibiki appealing(not that i would go for him but still.)I cant wait to see what the couple comes up against next. It would probably be weird if htose too got married and had kids.gah! but it oculd happen i suppose.anything is possible with you and this story.