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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
naruto should be with sakura and hinata
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Naruto with Sakura
and Sakura ain't a slut
and Sakura ain't a slut
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, this ussually isn't my sort of thing. However, I cannot say that I'm not enjoying it. Hmm, as for the questions...
Note to all my wonderful reviewers--thanks!! I actually have to work for the next couple days, so I probably won't be able to add anything new until Thursday night or Friday. So feel free to post suggestions or email me to them. I don't know what I want to do with Ibiki's place--maybe I better rewatch that filler stuff about his brother--I can't remember if they were a big clan that got killed off or a small family. I like the idea of a big empty mansion--like most Sasuke stories--but then an underground apartment in the basement of an ANBU building could be pretty cool too. So I guess what would help to know is
1. Should Ibiki have a house or an apartment? Houses have a sense of permenancy that I really don't associate with Shinobi's that often. It's something I don't really see Ibiki having. If he did I imagine it would be very bare. Building attachments to places and objects would perhaps be viewed as a weakness. Also, the sense of home can really result in a false sense of security, one that isn't afforded and active Shinobi.
2. If an apartment, should it be in an ANBU building or somewhere normal? Anbu, again so as not to build too many attachments. That and somewhat irritating dealing with neighbours who are secretly ( or atleast they try to be) afraid of you.
3. For a potential threesome--ANBU Shino or Gaara? Hmm, neither of them are really that appealing to me. However, you seem to have put in more hints toward Gaara. I can see Ibiki turnign it into a contest over who can cause her the most pleasure and pain. Ibiki would win, and perhaps in the act concrete his control over her 0.o;;;
4. Put in Ino-Chouji and Shikamaru-Temari subplot info or no? Yes, please!
5. When I write Gaara's party, who is Naruto with--Sakura or Hinata? (Sai can have whoever Naruto doesn't want since this is a Het. fiction.) OR should Naruto be with Sai?? Hmm, Maybe Naruto is there to see Gaara and get jealous with Gaara's flirting with the girl. As for who he would coem with. I imagine he would coem with his whole team. As for sexual tension you could have it all around. I remember reading that you were thinking of writing a Hinata Sai story. You might start some of the seeds of that here. HAve the stories be connected in a way. Not that you would have to read one to understand the other, but just to have some relationship. Therefore, you could have Sai flirt with Hinata a little bit. He can bi right, I mean he could drop his relationship with Naruto later on, realizing he was using sexuality as a way to express his love, but a love that was actually rooted in friendship not in deep desire.
Gah, woman you have me thinking such twisted thoughts. You have perverted my once "almost' innocent mind! Thank you ^^
Note to all my wonderful reviewers--thanks!! I actually have to work for the next couple days, so I probably won't be able to add anything new until Thursday night or Friday. So feel free to post suggestions or email me to them. I don't know what I want to do with Ibiki's place--maybe I better rewatch that filler stuff about his brother--I can't remember if they were a big clan that got killed off or a small family. I like the idea of a big empty mansion--like most Sasuke stories--but then an underground apartment in the basement of an ANBU building could be pretty cool too. So I guess what would help to know is
1. Should Ibiki have a house or an apartment? Houses have a sense of permenancy that I really don't associate with Shinobi's that often. It's something I don't really see Ibiki having. If he did I imagine it would be very bare. Building attachments to places and objects would perhaps be viewed as a weakness. Also, the sense of home can really result in a false sense of security, one that isn't afforded and active Shinobi.
2. If an apartment, should it be in an ANBU building or somewhere normal? Anbu, again so as not to build too many attachments. That and somewhat irritating dealing with neighbours who are secretly ( or atleast they try to be) afraid of you.
3. For a potential threesome--ANBU Shino or Gaara? Hmm, neither of them are really that appealing to me. However, you seem to have put in more hints toward Gaara. I can see Ibiki turnign it into a contest over who can cause her the most pleasure and pain. Ibiki would win, and perhaps in the act concrete his control over her 0.o;;;
4. Put in Ino-Chouji and Shikamaru-Temari subplot info or no? Yes, please!
5. When I write Gaara's party, who is Naruto with--Sakura or Hinata? (Sai can have whoever Naruto doesn't want since this is a Het. fiction.) OR should Naruto be with Sai?? Hmm, Maybe Naruto is there to see Gaara and get jealous with Gaara's flirting with the girl. As for who he would coem with. I imagine he would coem with his whole team. As for sexual tension you could have it all around. I remember reading that you were thinking of writing a Hinata Sai story. You might start some of the seeds of that here. HAve the stories be connected in a way. Not that you would have to read one to understand the other, but just to have some relationship. Therefore, you could have Sai flirt with Hinata a little bit. He can bi right, I mean he could drop his relationship with Naruto later on, realizing he was using sexuality as a way to express his love, but a love that was actually rooted in friendship not in deep desire.
Gah, woman you have me thinking such twisted thoughts. You have perverted my once "almost' innocent mind! Thank you ^^
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1. apartment
2. normal
3. fucking Shino yo! I can't see Gaara taking orders from Ibiki or sharing something
4. no subplot, they suck and take away focus from the main story
5. Naruto should so be with Sai...but like a beginning relationship ya know? Flirts and stuff
So yeah, very hot. Good times and rock on babe.
2. normal
3. fucking Shino yo! I can't see Gaara taking orders from Ibiki or sharing something
4. no subplot, they suck and take away focus from the main story
5. Naruto should so be with Sai...but like a beginning relationship ya know? Flirts and stuff
So yeah, very hot. Good times and rock on babe.
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the best story EVER! I mean that. Not only is each chapter enjoyable but your updating skillz are...phenomenal. Every sexual encounter is new and creative and so far form boring generic sex. I'm so not about vanilla. At first I really wanted to know who the chick was but know I don't even care. And wow Ibiki, there is no doubt in my mind he knows how to do fucking right. Oh god yes.
Thank you so much.
Thank you so much.
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, as always. Nice explanation on the genjutsu, that sort of thing would be handy for Ibiki.
1. Should Ibiki have a house or an apartment? Hard call- I vote an apartment
2. If an apartment, should it be in an ANBU building or somewhere normal? Definately in the ANBU building, and all soundproofed and whatnot
3. For a potential threesome--ANBU Shino or Gaara? Gaara
4. Put in Ino-Chouji and Shikamaru-Temari subplot info or no? (For example, if they go to Gaara's party, should these be the couples to talk about)Subplots are always fun, so yes.
5. When I write Gaara's party, who is Naruto with--Sakura or Hinata? (Sai can have whoever Naruto doesn't want since this is a Het. fiction.) OR should Naruto be with Sai?? He should be with Sai, het be damned.
1. Should Ibiki have a house or an apartment? Hard call- I vote an apartment
2. If an apartment, should it be in an ANBU building or somewhere normal? Definately in the ANBU building, and all soundproofed and whatnot
3. For a potential threesome--ANBU Shino or Gaara? Gaara
4. Put in Ino-Chouji and Shikamaru-Temari subplot info or no? (For example, if they go to Gaara's party, should these be the couples to talk about)Subplots are always fun, so yes.
5. When I write Gaara's party, who is Naruto with--Sakura or Hinata? (Sai can have whoever Naruto doesn't want since this is a Het. fiction.) OR should Naruto be with Sai?? He should be with Sai, het be damned.
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lady you got positively f#@#ing POETIC for a minute there, that stuff about Ibiki and the death God, Wow, do it again! do it again! And to answer your questions, I like the privacy of a house, I also like the idea of a house because they have cellars, and oh mann, the stuff that you find in cellars (Sigh!) As for a 3some, my initial choice would always be Gaara, because I love him... but the scaryness of Shino may have more potential, especially since he's more likely to let Ibiki order him around. Oh and Never discount Kiba - parties seem to be his thing, and with all eyes on him, bad slave may need to be punished. As for other couples, I LOVE Shikamaru and Temari everyone else: interchangeable. Anyway keep up the good work!!! you remind me of my favourite series - The Sleeping Beauty chronicles by Ann Rice.
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NO SHIKAXTEMARI PLEASE! truthfully i'm sick of the pairing... but SaixSakura NarutoxHinata would be fine, and InoChouji! i love that pairing. so... wait... if you do wanna use shikamaru, try pairing him with sakura and sai with temari... hehehehehe! omg! that would be funny
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I go with liquid inspiration...thats what i do whenever i update. i just get rip roaring drunk and then pound away on my keyboard, rum helps...it really really helps. And as for all that stuff you know when you start to write it will come to you and it willf eel right, truthfully i get away from asking my readers this stuff cause i just end up doing what iw ant any ways XD
Anyways i ahve to tell you i LOVED the new chapters since i updated last and ic ant wait for more, and yea you update like serious pro...i mean it a PRO. MAkes me feel aweful in a way and yet im fine with that, ill eat it and love it and savor it and then maybe hurt myself with it later....mmm yummy.
So anyways have fun writing and ill wait patiently for your next work.
Anyways i ahve to tell you i LOVED the new chapters since i updated last and ic ant wait for more, and yea you update like serious pro...i mean it a PRO. MAkes me feel aweful in a way and yet im fine with that, ill eat it and love it and savor it and then maybe hurt myself with it later....mmm yummy.
So anyways have fun writing and ill wait patiently for your next work.
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
APPARTMENT
ANBU SOUNDPROOF
BOTH (GAARA AND SHINO)
YES FOR SUBPLOTS...AND SUBPLOT SEX
HINA/KIBA? SAI/SAKURA/NARUTO
SO MANY WAYS TO HAVE FUN I HAVE TOTALLY TRUST IT WILL ALL WORK
ANBU SOUNDPROOF
BOTH (GAARA AND SHINO)
YES FOR SUBPLOTS...AND SUBPLOT SEX
HINA/KIBA? SAI/SAKURA/NARUTO
SO MANY WAYS TO HAVE FUN I HAVE TOTALLY TRUST IT WILL ALL WORK