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i like jealous ibiki. i think that it would be a nice twist for gaara to show interest in mystery girl just so ibiki will get jealous again!! keep up the good work! ; )

I think it was the title that caused me to not read your newest fic. However, that has obviously changed.
I love this story. It has all the things that I secrectly lust over -scars, Ibiki, bad relationships with the emotional highs and lows. Overly dominate men. *drool* Ibiki..
The teapot scene between Shino and Ibiki was perfect, read it three times. I really had to wonder about Ino and company showing up, though Ino's panties.. ewww. And who hasn't found someone or something to obsess over? Her trying to find someone other than Ibiki was just too funny.
I am very curious to see how Ibiki reacts to her being around Gaara. Was the little display about mine is the only cock you touch etc for effect or was the man actually a bit concerned?
I don't think I could be even remotely calm enough to do anything but stare at the man while he slept.
Babble aside, I am truly sorry that I passed this story by the first time you uploaded it. I could talk about each chapter but I hope to keep this to a polite thank you for writing this.
Maybe after I read it a third or fourth time Ill have something better to say than fangirl-ese.
Nacht

k...one sentence describes it all:

THIS IS A FABOULOUS MASTER PIECE!!!

Keep the updates coming...(^_^)...

Possessive & jealous, and even a dash of vulnerability, yum yum! I envy your ability to pop out chapters so quickly!

I just started reading and am on the end of chapter 2, I have to say that it really isn't my style. But damn you for sucking me in with the need to find out who the person is. "You’re a suicide looking for a weapon" was a great line and there are some really great parts within the story. I just don't like the domination aspect of it, but I'll keep reading it cause you sucked me in.

Oh my GOD.... you rock my world bitch, write as much as you want, you are fucking A++. Wow! Lady you just made fantasies I didn't know I had come true. 10 points I am so going to be reading this to the love of my life, he'll be extatic and who knows I might find myself tied to a kitchen cupboard. Hey, one can only hope, right? Anyway, on to more constructive criticism... You really know how to make a mood, and keep it. All the best S&M traits are present:
the co-dependency, the absolute desire to please, you've got this, I can't think of anything I'd change and for me that's amazing, feel flattered.

i really like how this is turning out! so, ibiki is a closet romantic, huh? go figure. it only seems appropriate since he is the embodiment of a total hard-ass! can't wait for another update!

Wow, your stuff is just mindblowingly good. If you have a beta I am so jealous of them right now. Your BDSM stuff is so exciting to read. Every time I sign on AFF I look to see if your stuff has updated. I could go on forever, and while I would love to leave some form of constructive criticism just to make this useful, I honestly can't think of anything to critique. So I leave you with this, you rule.

All hail the traveling pussy! what a great story! Keep up the great work, Hestia... you are one class act.
I look forward to the next chapter.

I am still loving this story. A lot of stories loose me after a few chapters, but I love your Ibiki and can't wait to read more.