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for The Traveling Pussy

by Hestia

person Josie
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Great pairing!
person Krickets
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well yea if you wanna do somthing with gaara why dont you do a second arc when this one is done. That works too.

I really wanna see where your going with this, and personally the kunoichi dosnt bother me...we all just imagine the face of whoever we want anyways.

And no trust me this site still likes a good story like this, this place was intended for devaints and people who wanted to post stories that were not accepted any where else. It wasnt a site just devoted to lemons but to exploring darker sides to sex and relationships, its really quite fascinating and i am only sorry that this site has seemed to drift so far away fromt hat concept. Well you know if you want to see somthing similar you can read either my story Ink Me or tsukashis "as the world falls down" i think you might like them. Also corruption of konoha you might like.

Well i am looking forward to your next chapter!
Krickitat
person Kyuubi Fanatic
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome...(speechless)
person akasha
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sooo, is ibiki already riding the jealousy train, or is he playing some weird psychological game with mystery slut? inquiring minds want to know...
person tsukashi
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh WOW! Great lemon! I can't wait to see more! You are totally enjoying teasing us as to who she is, aren't you!?
person krickets
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh!
that was really good!
Im glad you got back to this principal and i am sorry i doubted you

Keep up the good work and i am happy that you like to post lol i appreciate it

anyways i look forward to your next chapter
person Annie
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So it aint sakura good cuss i thinkis anko
person Tsukashi
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my GAWD!!! You can't stop there! I go out of town overnight and suddenly there are 4 more chapters! hehe! Hurry and update! (I know who it is! I know who it is! - or I think so at any rate! Tenten? The knife flipping kinda clenched it.) But HOLY HELL!!! There's Ibiki, and from the sounds of it, HE KNOWS! For the love of all that is holy, UPDATE SOON!
person Aria
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wooot!!! Great work...update soon....I'm totally hooked!! Is the mystery kunoichi Tenten?
person krickitat
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im kinda sad that you backed off the idea of her being with Ibiki i mean i know that there are alot of scary missing Nin and gaara as well and that would seem like a good choice but thats been DONE

and i mean DONE DONE, way way toooooo DONE

I had really hoped you were going somewhere different with this.
Oh well i guess ill stick around and see what happens you might surprise me.