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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This definately an interesting story and I look forward to reading more.
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh hell., they're in for it now!
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! i love this plz update soon. best of luck!!
AoiKitsune =^-^=
AoiKitsune =^-^=
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please have someone chech your grammer and sentence structure. At least proff read you work. This has potential but, the grammer is below a high school level. Keep on trying.
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! I can't wait to see what happens in this ^^. I can't believe Neji had the NERVE to do that to Naruto! he really was digging his own grave ^^ I here over there in Jerusulom if they say to a women "women" it's a form of repect...and the way Neji said the word "women" it didn't sound not at all respectful. I sure hope Naruto kicks everyones' *who was stupid enough to attend and not tell Naruto about the little get-together* asses ^^
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i thought you already had a beta? if you're submitting this beta'd i'm afraid i'll have to advise you to get a new one. there are plenty of SIMPLE mistakes. obviously, your beta isnt very experienced. the plotlines pretty nice and the grammer mistakes are ruining it. find a new beta.
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol!! love it! naru is soo funny!! hehe! please update soon!
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol. i must say this is rather interesting and amusing. so do update more and soon. ^^
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the theme of your story. I hope the next chapter tell us about Naruto and Gaara's connection. He certanly seems to have an advantage...I want a Naruto/Sasuke pairing! Please, please, please! I want to see also, everyone's techniques for seducing the fox! Please update as soon as you can!!! Mmmm...also, do you have a mailing list that I can suscribe to? I want to know when you next update! Please let me know.
Carla
Carla
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue the story its very good and I'd like to read the rest of it