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THIS IS SUCH A FREAKING BRILIANT IDEA FOR A STORY YOU KOOKED ME FROM CHAPTER ONE. I'LL BE LOOKING FORWARD FOR THE UPDATES. OH POOR SASUKE HE LOST ONE POINT. PLIZ CLEAR UP HOWW IS IT THAT NONE WITH THE EXCEPTION OF GARA KNEW WHO THE UZUMAKI HEIR WAS IF THEY KNEW NARUTO FROM SCHOOOL?????

Wow, I was seriously starting to think that you had died!

But it was worth the wait, a funny chapter indeed!

Please update soon.

this will be a fun story im looking forward to the furture chapters

Sasuke will surely have a hard time catching Naruto's heart, with his attitude. But Gaara, it will probably even be harder. Go Sasuke! Catch more points, I really think those two match up perfectly.

rewiiew faster please

Nice new chapter, I liked. Though I'm sad that we have to wait so long for a new chapter, hopefully you'll be inspired or something and it won't take as long as it could. I have to say I'm rooting for everyone but Sasuke, not that I dislike him but we need some non-SasuNaru stories. And you seem open to them, so I'm hoping that's what we'll see. Though I have to say I'm really rooting for Neji and Gaara, they're my favorites. Also I can't wait until Itachi comes into it, though I'm wondering how your planning to do so since he doesn't seem to be part of the competition. I wouldn't have minded an ItaNaru story, I love that pairing too. That's also another one that isn't very common. Anyways, that's all. I would give you criticism, but I've pretty much said it before and I would just be repeating myself. Plus I get the impression that you know in general what your problems are and you mentioned a beta so that's good and that's that:)

XD OMFG, YAY!

I love it! >__< Sasuke-baka already has negative points... lol.

I really like ShikaNaru, but I think GaaNaru or NejiNaru would work better in this fic. I wouldn't do SasuNaru - its used WAY too often. And Shino and romance just don't mix.

I vote GaaraNaruto or NejiNaruto!

-Whines- Sasuke lost one point already.... -Puppy dog eyes- Please make it SasuNaru! PWEASE!

Also, after Naruto sent his pheramones loose, you said there was only 5 competitors left, but in the second chapter, at the end, Naruto looks at two 'guys' and says that no girls were to be in the contest, with there already being four others, Shika-kun, Gaara-chan, Sasuke-kun ^^, and Neji-san. Meaning there was 6 competitors, not five @_@

Update please love the story

ooh another update YaY..this is a really funny fic and a really good one, love me a prankster naruto and a pissy Sasuke, but mostly I love to watch guys competing for Naru's affection hehe, sorry bout your beta though, but dont worry I get the jist of the story and my stories are usually waaaaaaaaaaaay bad and my native language is ENGLISH which is shamelful I must say, so your doing a wonderful job, anyhow I cant wait to read more and if your still taking votes well I myself am a SasuNar/NaruSasu fan so Naru with Sasu is theee best and what I vote for, but I will still love what ever you write, ty for the read and update, hope to read more in the near future, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)