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Great start for the fanfiction I hope your enjoyed writing this as much as Im enjoying reading it!

This story is very intriguing! I can't wait to see what Naruto has to say to Gaara though and why he's so pissed at him.
Update soon!

ps: What's the relationship between Naru/Sai/Kiba? Is it like...*shifty eyes and twiddling fingers*...you know...*blushes deeply*...a threesome?

i liked it so far. WRITE MORE PLEEEASE!!!!!!!!!

OHOHOHOHOHHOHOHOHO!! This story is incredibly similar to Wolfie Foxie! Which is like one of my most FAVORITE stories! ^_^ man... i love your story! You gotta update though koi! please? For me? and my cute little wolf puppy I'm getting in four weeks!? YAY! I'm so happy! Nothing could go wrong! - lol... well, lots of things could but let's look beyond that ne? Okay... so... i hope you're almost done with the second chappy! ^_^

wait......I'm confused. They're all animals? Or they can shape-shift and everything? Cuz you pointed out the batting of the tail and then Naruto leaning on Kiba's shoulder and all that. Or is it just that everyone is in human form and has their own tails?

AAAAAHHHHHHH!!! Why are you not updating this? This seems like a really great story. Most interesting so far. Please update! It seems people really care about who Naruto ends up with. The truth is I couldn't care less as long as someone is gonna be with him. Remember it's your story you're the one that gets to choose the final pairing, you don't have to let people influence you into changing the story although it's always good to listen to suggestions!

I swear when it ended lik that i yelled "NNNOOOOOOO!!!" My mamma cam down stairs and looked at me like I was crazy and asked me what was wrong, I just said I felt like yelling......yea. So now she thinks her daughter is a crazy person who needs to be loked up. O.o but yea, the point of this all is me saying. I LOVE UR STORYS! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! *gives naruto plushy* pretty please? ^-^'

keep writing its awesome

it good i like it .paz update

You must continue. you must. you must! I thoroughly enjoyed this frst chapter. pa-Leez update soon. don't leave me high and dry. I would totally love to see the progression of this ompetition and how Naruto will react to this entire arrangement. And why can't he find a mate himself as all males do? or is he doomed to be a uke from the start? i mean afterall i doubt the other clan heirs, who happen to be male, can produce children themselves...therefore it was doomed for Naru to be uke...unless he mates with a female...but wy isn't he mating with a female?...i guess his love interest is in males and his parents found out therefore they might have wanted to support him but only if he agreed to marry a male of high lineage...but even that is illogical since he could always marry a female of high lineage....oh well, that is just my mind churning for you. whatever the reason, the reason. I would comment on your possible grammatical errors or other problems but i really am...a bit toed up..soooo update soon and maybe i'll go into detail later...