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I like it so far :). This is getting very interesting, I really want to know what happens next :D! Please update as soon as possible,pretty please with sugar on top, and icecream!!!

Coolio, it's always nice to see an mpreg story. I like your beginning so far. You do have grammatical problems but I find I can overlook it, but it would do to get a beta eventually. I'd offer but I've found I'm not a good beta, I take too long and sometimes forget.

I had a question for you. I noticed that in your heading you list as pairings SasuNaru then OthersNaru. Does that mean that you've already decided on a final pairing of Sasuke and Naruto? If you haven't then I humbly request that someone else ends up with Naruto. We have some serious SasuNaru overkill going on in the fandom, especially in case of love-triangles (or more). It ALWAYS, ALLLLLLYWAYS ends up SasuNaru. I've been searching for a bit of uniqueness among pairing decisions in the fandom and I'm hoping that you'll provide it. Go Neji! Go Gaara! Go Shikamaru! Go Shino! Go anyone but Sasuke because it's about time that others get a chance with Naruto (though I'm really rooting majorly for Neji and Gaara).

Anyways I hope you update soon and we get to see the reactions to Naruto. I'm imagining a group of guys being struck dumb because of Naruto's naive gorgeousness:D

Yai!!! I't sooo... ummmm soooo....................
well it's something I have never seen before, I love it, please update soon!!!!

Interesting sorry, i can't wait for the next chapter, please continue soon.

Your English is good.

I love this so much!