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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good it kind of hit a soft stop and I like your a good writer and I can't wait to read more of your work.
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah your right there aren`t many Naru/tsu stories out there and even less of Naruo/Shizune I wouldn`t mind seeing more of them and thos yaoi stories they are way way to many of them oh well keep up the good work
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well i like this chapter alot. i felt for naruto!! i was feeling sorry for him. good job!
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it and I'm crying. I can't type when I'm crying, so I'll just tell you that it was a wonderful ending and I am very pleased with how you wrote it. Great job.
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great. Another fantastic TsuNaru in the works. I couldn't help but snicker when you wrote "several years" in the age difference.
When he was twelve, she was already pushing 50. So.. add maybe a decade to his age.. several years is a vast understatement.
Hah.
When he was twelve, she was already pushing 50. So.. add maybe a decade to his age.. several years is a vast understatement.
Hah.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so many words/sentences were cut off
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice, the emotions and mood of this came across well as did the descriptive portions
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!! You did it again. Beautiful...Beaitful writing. Omg I am speechless. And I mean no offense by saying this but it is rare to see a male have this much depth in his story. Man you are good. I will say the opening was a wee bit choppy but you quickly smoothed that out and worked it out!!! I hope to read more form you soon. Good JOB!