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person Moron
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmm. Great story! It really is.
I also like that your fic.. Mm. What was it? Oh yeah! ''Payment''! If yu can.. and if you want to, I hope you would continue that story too. Yeah, I'm sorry.
This fic is good, too. Good that you updated!
person malimillions
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Dare to write hot demon sex! xD Woo - hoo!
person kawaiicrimsonkitsune
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the story. Keep up the good work.
person Nyuchan
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uuh.. i like it ^.~

Please continue :)
person lilith
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
waaaah! this is so awesome! i really really liked the story, its different from any ive read before. great job and i would be so excited if you did continue this... and, soon please? lol...
person blisblop.
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well here's a new idea.I like it alot.Oh joy,you are not shy either.Good raunch.This is tre cool.naruto's emotions are all here,Gaara has a wonderfully twisted mind,as does Neji and did I hear Sasuke's name perhaps?Yee Haw.urm.Thank you.He does sound beautiful,Naruto that is(we know Neji and sasuke are beautiful.)Gaara's beauty has always been his passion though he is uber cute.
person malimillions
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This did NOT suck.... It was really bloody fantastic and magnificent ..... will you even continue this series? 'Cause you've surely got me addicted.... Naruto's blend of him and the fox is unique, original, and just as Gaara said, perfect. Gaara himself is wonderfully portrayed as dominant, territorial, smug and sexual.... just lovely. Please do continue!
person Zrina
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok, that was really really freakin hot !!!!!! defintely addicted now, must have more!!
person LadyApollonia
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! You have to finish this! This is such a great fic! So hot too! *flails* This is beautiful.