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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok, you probably didn't mean this to be comical, but man i was on the floor laughing my fool head off; especially with the interchange between naruto and zabuza. i could just picture it in my head. and i can't WAIT for itachi and naruto to get together so kakashi can be jealous. please let me have this dream for a little while, even if that's not how you're going to write this. i want anyone who causes naruto pain to suffer ... well, at least a little bit before they kiss and make up. LOL!
Nice update!
Nice update!
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November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Blue, don't let Naruto get harassed, pinned, ravished or mobbed by hormone driven shinobis. He already has enough to deal with. Seriously Blue this fic is funny & intense. I want to find out what happens next. Please update soon! PS. Blue get some sleep & be nice to Naruto!
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November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good, good, good! Can't wait for more. :)
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your fic was the 3rd one I've read tonight, and it is sooooooooo awesome! Dang, what talent. I'm not big on KakaNaru, but some ItaNaru is coming up, right? What do I like about your story? 1) Kyuubi and Naruto are buds. 2)Itachi likes Naruto, and 3) there's humor galore! The Iruka Unhinged scenes had me screeching so loud my cat thought I was coughing up a hairball. LOL!
Hope you update soon!
Hope you update soon!
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August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is sooo good, you have to update soon. I want to know how Naruto will react when he gets to know who is on his team, and also how Kakashi and Itashi will react to having Naruto as their capten.
Great writing, keep up the good work =)
Great writing, keep up the good work =)
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting plot, I like how you built up the suspense between Kakashi and Naruto, even if it took several chapters... :P You have quite a few tense errors, but otherwise, technically-speaking, your story is fine. I like how you brought all the other characters into the story.
Anyway, updates are good. :D
Anyway, updates are good. :D
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay another chapter - just a lucky day i have had (this is the second story that has updated that i keep tabs on)
Oh a six man group ... i hope sasuke isn't in it - that would be weird for some reason (two brother's working together - just odd), i hope Garaa is in it (i love him ^__^)
Oh did Kakashi say naruto was just a kid, or meant nothing to him?? Now i wanna know
And poor Shika got hurt
Can't wait for the next chapter
Oh a six man group ... i hope sasuke isn't in it - that would be weird for some reason (two brother's working together - just odd), i hope Garaa is in it (i love him ^__^)
Oh did Kakashi say naruto was just a kid, or meant nothing to him?? Now i wanna know
And poor Shika got hurt
Can't wait for the next chapter
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've read 4 chaps so far, but now it's 2 in the morning and i'm tired, so i'll finish it 2morrow-i really like it so far though-
especially the hominess of Kisame, Itachi and sasuke, plus ur story is just really funny! It's always nice 2 see a pairing with naruto other than sasuke (honestly I think that one's played on too much)
especially the hominess of Kisame, Itachi and sasuke, plus ur story is just really funny! It's always nice 2 see a pairing with naruto other than sasuke (honestly I think that one's played on too much)
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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool!! you updated!!! *dances* I love this story!!
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that you will have Kakashi and Itachi on Naruto's team. Do I get the cookie?
Please send me an email when you update this story.
Please send me an email when you update this story.