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*sighs*...that was beautiful. Thank you for that.

SW

...oh. Oh-me, oh-my, oh dear me. Thank you for gracing the fanfiction world with your talent, and your rawness. Seriously: thankyou-thankyou-thankyou.

Freakin' sizzle right there, that delightful mire of insane and irrational passion contrasted against the simplicity (and abruptness) of your dialogue. "You cum at the mere sight of me" (forgive me for not remembering the actual wording, but the impression remains) within all that... what rhythm!

Friggin' SUBLIME, my friend. Your words are weapons.

Plz write 3965797 more fix by tomorrow, kthx. (lol)

- DeeDubya

shit. that. was. amazing. i don't even know where to start. it was beautifully written. made me smile at times, others it made me go, quite simply, "wow". i'm in awe at the quality and total subtlety of this piece--one can very nearly call it a piece of art. bravo. just... wow.

OMG that was wonderful! I havent been to this site in a while and finding a story like this so soon was quite a treat! I love the way you wrote the story, its different than most. There is sooo much emotion there--it flavors the whole thing. I love it so much, definately one of the best one-shots I have ever seen!!! YOU ARE AWESOME--this story was fantastic!!!!! Keep up the great work!

ooo me loves de lemon, la details, ooooo SEEEX *Drools* j/k i really liked it! Is there a sequal?

OMG! I can not begin to tell you how much I love NaruSasu and the way you have captured them. No one is being girly, pregnant, or out of charactor. This is the way I truely picture their relationship being. And, oh the metaphores, and references to the actually series are so beautifully woven into the discriptions of this moment with them. I do want more, but it would almost seem like a criminal jinx to force your work to come forth again.

i enjoyed it. i'll write one too.