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person Munch
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, you have to update, soon. You must!

I concur, don’t add saixsaku, stick with Sasuke.
person Tank
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Naruto being the sweetheart he was... threatening the old man that lived next door..." That line just totally rocked. I can so visualize it.
person Revi
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so in love with this story. But please do not side track and make it a Sakura and Sai fic.You now what would make the story real good though. If Sasuke came back and thought that Sakura is really having Sai's child. DRAMA!!!! But am sure you were thinking that idea already.
person T-chan
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ayee..Poor Sai... ;.; but he surely has some guts... ^^

keep up the great work ^^ *thumbs up*
person Sakura Blossom101
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Me like! please update soon! and i hope that Sasuke comes in soon.
person morwen re
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg! i was right! yay! ... ok, going to stop jumping up and down for joy now that i realize the problems sakura is going to be in now. poor sai, i don't really know all that much about him, but i can't help but feel sorry for the poor guy. he likes sakura, but it looks like the only way he's going to get her is if he becomes a replacement for sasuke, which isn't going to be fun... please, please update again soon!
person T-chan
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What an unpredictable movement... xD
Anyways I love your story...Keep up please... *puppy-eyes*
person Mariko-chan
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG I luv your story so much! Please hurry and update!!!
person akasha
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aha! i knew it! i'm interested to see just what sai thinks of everyone volunteering him for the job, though. definitely looking forward to the coming chaptters! i really want sasuke to know about his child... maybe it would make him reconsider his lot in life?
person chibitori13
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg please update the story soon!!!!

its awsome!!!

XD