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person Sakura Blossom101
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL! This is great please update soon!
person whiteblossoms23
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update:) It's getting interesting here
person akasha
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i just knew it! i'm just waiting for you to confirm it! so... i'm thinking that it would be really sweet and romantic if Sai and Sakura were to hook up, and Sai would (nobly) take up the task of being a father to Sasuke's child, but he should know that he had a child with Sakura. Anyway, please update soon!! So far so good!!
person Tank
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Teehee! It's kinda obvious! The blood tests came back indicating Uchiha-induced pregnancy! She's infected with Uchiha-spawn! XD

Oooh! I like the new Sai-angle to the triangle (or should I say polygonal? There's Lee, and let's not forget the older fanboys too!). Sakura sure has a lot of blokes getting all hot for her. ^.^ Never thought I'd say this, but it's good that he still keeps his potty-mouth. XD Oh! and I like the scene with the fireflies! Love those! (BTW, did Sakura flash Sai during the sparring session? Coz he had a nosebleed, and the No. 1 cause for nosebleeding in anime is... ^^;)

Hmm... I always thought that according to the manga, Sakura (and Naruto) were always determined to bring Sasuke back, whether he's willing or not, and probably knock some (a lot) of sense into him. Somehow Sakura's thoughts during that walk home with Sai seem to indicate that she's given up on bringing him back. Which has me going "HMMM...".

Still, love this fic, love the comedy--keep it up, sugar!
person meliny
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOH!! its good keep writing!!
person morwen re
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
gah! i'm going to make a long shot guess... sakura is pregant! whoot! O.o' i'm probally wrong, but i love to make off the wall guesses like this... i love the story! i hope you update again soon!
person AFFreader
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well nice fic , I would like more fluffyness...Here's my guess on next chapter: Sakura is pregnant. Somehow the medics will find out who is the father , Tsunade gets REALLy mad....Sakura's life becomes hell for 9 months , when the kid finally is born. SOmehow Sasuke appears and the pair decides to live away from konoha village. Sakura is banned from Konoha's village , but she couldn't careless , becaus eshe is too busy working with sasuke to rebuild the Uchiha's clan , the most pleasant way ;)
Well I think that it's a nice guess. Now go and surprise me.
person Sakura Blossom101
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Though i really really hope that you put more Sasuke Sakura in it, but besides that i love it!
person KH
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been emjoying this so much and I can tell its only going to get better.

Sakura-chan lies will catch up to you eventually, specially when you just had a lot of sex with no protection...

^-^

Now what is Tsunade going to say?
person squall's girl
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow..i'm really touched and impressed. *sigh* it feels like i'm in the story, feeling what sakura's feeling towards sasuke..i just wanna ask, is this going to be a happy ending? hope u update soon.