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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
kick ass!! i love the way you make sasuke such a cold but sexy ass! adn sakura...nice is all i can say, and ur first chappi cracked me up!
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
grade A keep it up!!
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice one. Like your writing and especially your badass sakura X3
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOOT! That's what I wanna see! Sakura verbally bitchslapping Sasuke like WOAH! And fantasizing in her sleep about other men that'll make him jealous like WOAH! (Woah, Sai's held her like this before? She KNOWS his scent?!?) XD You GO, Sakura.
p/s: I hope you plan to grammar and spell-check the whole thing when it's finished--love your style ("I’m _a_ alive! And in pain."), but needs a bit of revising. Still, love the prompt update! Keep it up, sugar!
p/s: I hope you plan to grammar and spell-check the whole thing when it's finished--love your style ("I’m _a_ alive! And in pain."), but needs a bit of revising. Still, love the prompt update! Keep it up, sugar!
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is so good. Keep writing and updating.
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh i love it! Please update soon!
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice story but what about when he left how did he go about it. And besides Orochimaru tricking him into thinking he could make him stronger by a pill is rediculous and hope you keep writing and keep up the good work
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool! Looks like it's off to a great start! I like your style of storytelling. Please update soon like you said!
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice start, lets see where this one takes us, update soon
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
kick ass fic! keep it up girl!