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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First of all, GO NEJI!! I'm glad he convinced Naruto to get it all documented. Second, there definitely is more to a story than sex. Sex would be too much at this point and it would take away from the story. I how your going so far with it and I can't wait until you update next:)
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!...You updated!!...^^... checking back often pays off!!
Well... it seems Naruto's curse worked!!... XD
But Sasuke deserves it... I mean... what he did...>.<
Well... it seems Naruto's curse worked!!... XD
But Sasuke deserves it... I mean... what he did...>.<
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God yesssssssssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!! i love it. keep going. yay. lol ^_^. god i can't wait till your next up date. god pleaz pleaz pleaz PLEAZ!!! UP-DATE SOOOOOOOOOON..........OK?......LOL ANYWAY SEE YA NEXT TIME KAY. ^^
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UP-DATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!............................SOON! LOL ^_~
BYE-BYE
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UP-DATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!............................SOON! LOL ^_~
BYE-BYE
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah for update! So are you saying that Sasuke didn't actually see Naruto at the concert? it was somebody else with blue eyes? It's an interesting concept though I think I'd have to agree with Neji that Naruto wouldn't wish bad on someone. does Naruto feel sorry for Sasuke at all? Oh there's so much I don't know! You'll just have to keep writing I guess.
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well Naruto is traumatized, Sasuke is a complete bastard and Neji is a sweetheart,I really can't see where's this fic going but I'll be here to see it
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. :)
i *LOVE* every scene with Sasuke!! XD
That Itachi/Gaara/Sasuke thing was just sooo...wow! *drools*
The bad thing is that you're kinda sloppy when it comes to Naruto. Unless he had a reason to react the way he did, it just seems too....fanficish. As in, "zomg I just got raped but it doesn't matter, let me just get naked with my bf." :/ Other than that, great story and I can't wait to read more! :)
i *LOVE* every scene with Sasuke!! XD
That Itachi/Gaara/Sasuke thing was just sooo...wow! *drools*
The bad thing is that you're kinda sloppy when it comes to Naruto. Unless he had a reason to react the way he did, it just seems too....fanficish. As in, "zomg I just got raped but it doesn't matter, let me just get naked with my bf." :/ Other than that, great story and I can't wait to read more! :)
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap!!! more more more more more!!!!! *curses cliffhangers*
Oh man, I was hooked on this story right away!
I knew it wasn't going to be all "happy rainbows" with Itachi, Gaara, and Sasuke all in one band, but SHEESH! chapter two shocked the pants off me! I think I need a chapter warning or something for THAT kind of stuff...but-I-really-liked-it-- XXDDD; lol...
CONTINUE!!!! ...please... ^^ (for some reason I had a hard time picturing Sasuke in red...I wonder why O_O?)
Oh man, I was hooked on this story right away!
I knew it wasn't going to be all "happy rainbows" with Itachi, Gaara, and Sasuke all in one band, but SHEESH! chapter two shocked the pants off me! I think I need a chapter warning or something for THAT kind of stuff...but-I-really-liked-it-- XXDDD; lol...
CONTINUE!!!! ...please... ^^ (for some reason I had a hard time picturing Sasuke in red...I wonder why O_O?)
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it!!!!!!!! i can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!! update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!^-^
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a really amazing story. It's definately different from any other I've read and I really enjoyed it. You're a great writer, and I can't waite until the next update! Keep it up <3
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well that was dramatic. Can't wait to see the reactions and to check up with Naruto and Neji. I'm hoping he called the cops, but I'm not really expecting that he will have.