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for My Curse

by sasukeskyuubi

person kyuubigirl
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude, i was worried after the third chapter and afraid i wouldn't like where it was goin' but ooh no i liked that chapter. that was awesome. i thought they were just gonna be in 2 places w/ completely separate stories or something. but naruto went to the concert or did sasuke just imagine it??? wow. i like that sasuke didn't really remember it... yay im hooked again
person Stacy
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really, really like this fic!!I've never known Sasuke to be a wuss though. I hope his rough neck, bad attitude, hot for sex persona comes back...BIG TIME!!!
person rachael
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really, really love this piece. It's one of the better ones I've read in awhile. I'll be really interested to hear why Naruto is at the concert, and how you're going to play out their relationship and everything like that. Keep up the good work.
person kyuubigirl
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL, I'm glad I'm not a NaruSasu spaz or I would have flipped out with the Uchihacest, so yeah that was unexpected. Not that I mind. I rather like ItaSasu. It was good even though it was short. I thought the NejiNaru scene was just perfect, and I liked that it wasn't overly sexual there. Plenty of time for that. But I did like that the ItaGaaSasu scene was sort of graphicish. I sort of feel sorry for Sasuke and then I don't, so it'll be interesting if he runs into Naruto or Neji or both. I don't think Naruto seems like the type to let Sasuke push him around more than once... I don't like a wussy Naruto all that much, and Sasu here seems like a punk. I wonder if they'd actually get along... or at least how they will in the next chaps... good work tho! XD
person Stacy
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's not nice the way you tease everyone with a short and nondiscreptive(did I spell that right?)almost sex scene! I want mouth watering lemons!!Pleaseeeeee **SMILE**
person Shosuro
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!
o_0 !!!!

That was something I didn't think was going to happen!!!!
Sasuke raping Naruto....well we all knew the Sasuke/Itachi thing......
...but for Sasuke to take it out on Naruto!!!!
I can't wait to see Neji save the day!!!!!
This is soo cool!!
Great work!!
person Stacy
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah that's better!! You really need to add more to your profile...tell everyone about you. I'm quite curious actually!
person Sabby
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O...omg u made sasuke into a rapist NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
person Jess
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Me like! Plaz continue this superb story!
person Bookworm51485
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I definitely hope Neji kicks his ass. I was kind of expecting it, but that was still just bad. I hope Neji convinces Naruto to call the police, or he does it himself, because if nothing happens nothing, nothing will ever happen. And I hope Neji can be supportive of the situation. I like NejiNaru. Though your Neji seems to have a bit of a temper, at least when connected to Naruto getting hurt, looking at how he reacted when he found out someone had hit him.

And Sasuke has some major issues, with his brother and with himself. Not healthy and unfortunately other people, Naruto and by extension Neji, are getting caught up in his crap. Bad bad. I'm hoping he fixes what's wrong with him before he ends up hurting someone else.

And lastly, I may be off base, but I've seen too many stories go this way so I feel compelled to state that I really, really hope your not leading towards a SasuNaru conclusion. The moment Sasuke raped him (no matter what personal issues or problems led to it), that just became an impossibility unless working outside of the standards of reality. I hope I haven't insulted you, but I've seen too many good stories go down the drain by going down this road and I'm hoping not to see it with this story.