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ch. 13:

so, i was right, i had a few to catch up on! had to look at the rev's on TONFA to see where i'd last read.. apparently it was ch 12! but since you haven't updated past ch 13 there anyway, i will review here..

so, them coming together in the same chap was awesomely intense.. i loved the details of both their reactions, how sasuke's hand shook when he signed the cd and how he couldn't take his eyes from naruto, and how naruto felt intense and then couldn't go through with exposing sasuke in the end. their reactions/actions afterward were also appropriately extreme. just the right touch of angst and "self-medication" on both their parts. of course, uchihacestiness is always a bonus to me even (especially) if it's caused/accompanied by angst.

and nowwwwww... i will read the other chapters!! brb!

wow dude, i figured naruto would end up overdoing it on those pills.. yep yep.. despite the situation, i like how you managed to keep it at an undertone rather than over the top reaction from tsunade or whatever.. her concern was genuine, with a decent amount of parental chastisement. and you still managed to make me chuckle at things that are so true, like telling time from how many shows pass, etc. and this especially tickled me although judging by the fact that his insides were still decidedly on the inside of his body, his aunt had not heard him.

and now... DUM DUM DUM! sasuke and naruto, face to face again! *goes to next chap eagerly*

omg omg, you tease! lol, ah but hey, sometimes it takes small chapters to move to the next phase, ne? and at least you are updating! i'm really curious about what sasuke told kakashi.. and what naruto's reaction will be to seeing him/sasuke apparently ignoring him/if it'll effect his meeting with kakashi. and what sasuke plans to do when he finds out where naruto's room is/why he's there...

and on another note, i'd LOVE to see (err.. hear? ..read..) gai as a radio personality! it'd so fit him

great updates, dude, now i really wanna write more on SMFO! (which i was already doing before, but now i'm even more gung ho, cuz this fic somehow gets me fired up!)

&hearts
~ lg

Ha! Am I sensing a fellow Coloradoan? And yeah, most of CO can be considered the boons. Anways, I like the fic and will continue reading.

Thanks for the update. Your story continues to be very interesting.

maaaaaan, how'm i supposed to review this? lol gimme something to work w/ here! :p (aka more material):p:p:p squared.
hope ur moving went ok or is going ok.

later

*falls off chair*

OMG! YOU GOT ME! *is utterly punk'd* That was eeeeeevil. XD

Good luck with your moving! ^_^/

Thanks for the update........even if it was very short. Thanks for writing.

Gah!!!.. now that was just pure evil!!... XD

well, I can't wait for the rest of the chapter to come out.. figured he would end up there.. had a friend in high school pull the same stunt.. sort of...

Good luck with the move!! Hopefully it will go smoothly!!..^^..

>.< a teaser chapter. well i'm looking forward to the rest. i'll be a regular reviewer, i just discovered your story a bit late in the game. but that's a shame. i do believe you deserve more reviews. this is actually one of the stories i look forward to.