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Wow, gotta say this is the most interesting story I've read so far. I love it ^^ Nice job on it! Hope to read more soon!!

you're story's my new addiction. interesting analysis of the rapist mentaly - the social construct of rape -all bout control- and all that jazz. Naruto's attitude towards what happened or what he feels he'd let happen to him is strangely pretty accurate. i'm happy to see you didn't take the main high roads of rape fics that either end in "loving sex" or the person returning to normal, after locking themselves in a coma/room etc, through the love of their significant others or they cannot cope and tragically off themselves (although the latter is not quiiiiite aS far fetched). one thing you captured well is how weird it feels for naruto to exist within his skin- like it's too tight since he outgrew it; life begings to feel like touching objects w/ sensory deprived fingers; like understanding a foreign language you never new you knew. the world you know is suddenly scrambled and encrypted - and you no longer have the key to complete the code and get in. this is the part where sex and caring stop being interchangeble, this is the part when you grow a few degrees colder and more calculating, this is the time when a part of you permenetally detatches itself from you and is forvever observing you and your world with clinical objectiveness - this way you become incapable to ever giving your all to someone- shortcut to life calluses. I could understand, i suppose, Sasuke's despair - kindda like dying of laughter, literally. what was once welcomed, is now a curse, is now a trap - a thick plastic bubble isolating him from any hopes of normalicy. in the end he is given a rusty, blunt kitchen knife - as a tool of escape - namely the booze and its buddies, a.k.a. the sex he forced on Naruto. there is an odd sense of control over one's life in the lack of control, of responsability and blissful forgetfulness, w/ regards to one's actions when under the influence. " don't blame me, i'm sooooooo fucked" kindda attitude. interesting though how sasuke validated itachi's opinion of himself (the "you ARE a whore" comment at the end of naruto's rape) by furthering and solidifying the cycle of abuse with Naruto, proving how dependent had become on his own rape experiences to merely be or function as himself within the world errected, partially by himself, around him. it's hard to hate him. or itachi. because horrible circumstances had made them into themselves. perhapse sasuke feels remorse bcz he is still fighting the persona his brother is trying to build in him in the latter's own image.

so yeah. update, please!

just read your profile cuz i wanted to see what else you might have written since i seem to be diggin ur stuff. i guess you would be about the only other guy i found in this fandom. not alone! yeah! i meam it's cool ..cool.

so err UPDATE- just thought, ya know, i'd put that out there..:p

OMG more please more!!!

Amazing story. Update soon, plz!

This is a really good story,and you should keep it up so please update asap. i was also wondering what the names of the songs were that you used in your fic cuz they are really kinda cool. Keep up the good work ^ ^

WHAT??? ARE U SERIOUS!??

you got some nerve leaving me hanging like that! I was all like omg Naruto, and then theres no more!

please update soon! This fic Rocks!!

get it Rocks?! Like the band...lol ok not so funny

holy shit!!!! update!

that was great! can't wait for the next chapter.

This was soooooooo worth losing sleep to read!! They're face to face!!.. Yatta!!.. and.. umm.. uh-oh...lol.. but I just can't wait to see what happens next so please, please, please update this soon!!