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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. I feel sorry for both Naruto and Sasuke and I hope you are able to continue the story soon.
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh man that was harsh.....leaving us hanging like that!! I can't wait till you update! please let it be soon!
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! This fic is crazy good and so angsty that it made me cry! I can't wait to read more. And I really hope that Sasuke and Naruto can both find happiness. Naruto's problem seems more fixable than Sasuke's I hope they can help eachother!
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love your story! i can't believe i didn't find it sooner. i really like sasuke as a sexy singer and naruto as a preppy bookworm. usually you see authors place sasuke into that role, so i like that you took a different approach. now, i'm sorry if this is painfully obvious, but is this going to end up as a NaruNeji or a SasuNaru? anyway, i'm excited to see what naruto has in store for sasuke. he definitely deserves a little payback! i look forward to your next chapter!
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I still think it's a little extreme to have a body count of nine--that's some riot, brr. brr. Actually...I don't know if I've told you that before or not. Well, anywho...UPDATE EUPHORIA!! SqUeE! Joys for me. XD. I was actually impressed with how you wrote the press conference. You didn't have too much about it nor too little. It was easy to read and very well put-together in my opinion. I'm not completely following Naruto's drive and motivation--I keep wondering why he does that or why he thinks this. At the same time, I'm fascinated by it, and I want to see where you go with it. How much longer until Naruto and Sasuke meet face to face again??
Oh and did you write those song lyrics? I don't remember seeing a reference. If you did two thumbs way, way up. The phrasings and word choice were very poignant--though would it have made as much of an impact if I didn't know the back story to it? (ponders) Well, the truth of the matter is that anyone reading the story would know. *nods head* I don't know if there's a point to what I just said...
I like, I like. I go back and reread some earlier chapters now. You update.
O_O
Please??
Oh and did you write those song lyrics? I don't remember seeing a reference. If you did two thumbs way, way up. The phrasings and word choice were very poignant--though would it have made as much of an impact if I didn't know the back story to it? (ponders) Well, the truth of the matter is that anyone reading the story would know. *nods head* I don't know if there's a point to what I just said...
I like, I like. I go back and reread some earlier chapters now. You update.
O_O
Please??
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, another update and so soon! I like band stories (well, after Gravitation who doesn't;)) and I've liked yours from the start. Now I'm starting to pity Sasuke even he is a bastard for raping Naruto...
Please update soon!
PS A little remark if allowed - a Russian whip is called 'nagayka' (smth. familiar in it, ne?;), or 'nagaika'if you prefer :)
Please update soon!
PS A little remark if allowed - a Russian whip is called 'nagayka' (smth. familiar in it, ne?;), or 'nagaika'if you prefer :)
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Orochimaru is such a basted and poor Sasuke almost getting beaten to death. I was suspired that Itachi saved sasuke. I can't what to read the next chapter so please update soon.
P.S. Grate chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
P.S. Grate chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And another plot twist!! AAUGHH! I don't if my poor heart can handle it! I adore this story the more and more you write. It's was super awesome to see an update so soon, and I really appreciate it. Orochimaru is creepy. Which is good in a 'yes that's IC' kind of way...anywho! I can't believe you had Itachi do that! But I love it. As someone on deviantart said about ItaSasu--"I love the twisted fluff of this relationship." So...I suppose we could say that ItaSasu is the fluff on the dark-side of the mirror! Or something like that. The anti-fluff. Or maybe the dark!fluff would be more appropriate...
Anywho. Again awesome chapter. I will cross my fingers and hope that you can update so quickly a second time. (And thank you for the review response! That was uber cool.)
Some cyber cookies for your good work and keep on writing!
Anywho. Again awesome chapter. I will cross my fingers and hope that you can update so quickly a second time. (And thank you for the review response! That was uber cool.)
Some cyber cookies for your good work and keep on writing!
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February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay!!.. an update!!.. poor Sasuke though!!.. hmm.. is he going to run away and go back to talk to Naruto??..now I really want to know what Naruto is planning though!!.. please update soon!!!!!
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I want to know what happens next! I remember when this piece first came out, I was like, 'meh.' But somewhere around chapter four, I was OMG, I love this! The story is kickass, and though it's a bit roundabout in the sense of in-characterness, there is a certain sense of IC that is very good here. ...that didn't make any sense did it? Well, anywho, I'm still anxious to know what's going to happen to poor Sasuke! Though I also want to know what Naruto is going to do.
...You know, it's weird to think that if Naruto were to point the finger at Sasuke and get him arrested, it'd be a sort of kindness. Of course, then Orochimaru would probably get him out on bail, hire the best lawyers, and all that, so I guess it probably wouldn't really get Sasuke out of the bad situation that he's in.
itachi is creepy...which is as it should be. I'm still playing around with "naruto is a preppy" I don't know how I feel about that--except that it's definitely not overdone! ^_^
Well, here's hoping for a fast update.
...You know, it's weird to think that if Naruto were to point the finger at Sasuke and get him arrested, it'd be a sort of kindness. Of course, then Orochimaru would probably get him out on bail, hire the best lawyers, and all that, so I guess it probably wouldn't really get Sasuke out of the bad situation that he's in.
itachi is creepy...which is as it should be. I'm still playing around with "naruto is a preppy" I don't know how I feel about that--except that it's definitely not overdone! ^_^
Well, here's hoping for a fast update.