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You don't suck. This sucks: http:// www. ficwad. com/ viewuser. php? uid= 22970. That's what someone who sucks really looks like, not only in writing but in attitude and response. Your doing well so don't worry about it.

I see now we have Other World!Itachi. Complications abound. I can imagine him waking up, if he does wake up, and thinking that This WorlD!Naruto is his Naruto and freaking everybody out. And then Sai confronting Naruto.... I can't wait until your next chapter comes about.

Have you had any luck finding a beta?

This is getting really interesting and i'm always excited to see a new chapter!

Keep it up!

Hellagoddess

kyaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!
it's getting exciting. don't worry your doing just fine.
i luvvvv how twisted it was!!!!!
hope the other it-chan still alive. itll be sad if he dies.
pleeeeeeeeeeese make it ItaNaru ending. it just sssoooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeettttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ahhhh that is the fix that I so desperately needed!!!
Its like crack and its great!!!
You are going to make me cry when Naruto finds out where he is, and Itachi is gonna be sad!!! ***tears*** Argh!!! Who is gonna end up with who??? I can't wait!!

As always great work!!

this just keeps getting better and better! my favorite part was when naruto stared into it-chan's eyes. awesomness. i totally saw that in my mind. oh, btw, do u already have a beta?

AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

....ok.... i think i am fine now......

At first I was like....(what the F*&@!!)
Now that I read the First Chapter I am hooked!!!
I've read my fair share of fics and they are ALMOST always the same.....
but this!!!! This is something I have yet to read!!!! I was never a big fan of Naruto + Itachi, because it never made any sense to put them together as a couple, but YOU have a good vaild reason why they are together!!!! Different dimensions!!!! Its just GREAT!!!! I can't wait to read your next chapter!!!
Good work!!

Of COURSE I'd review your wonderful story. ;] I've never seen a plot like this before, you know. Two Narutos' in the same timeline.

...Disturbing. xDDD

I'd like to suggest that Naruto [Ita-Naru one] learns about his predicament early, so he can better understand what he's supposed to do. I'm sort of impatient to see what would happen when Naruto from that reality, and the Naruto from the 7-year-old-knew-Itachi-joined-Akatsuki-reality. A promising start, really.

Keep up the good job
Evans

Good, but.... WTF???!!??

Ok. Interesting, very interesting.

It would be nice if the chapters were longer, but you are updating rather fast it appears, so thats understandable. I was wondering if there are going to be any actual 'Lemons' in this story. Hopefully there will be. You should have a small ItaNaru moment where things are almost escalating to something sexual, but then have Itachi stop it to explain that he isn't who he appears to be. It would be interesting. Otherwise I like the way things are going. It seems very interesting. I just wish I had read the manga. I looked up some info though, so I'm not as much in the dark.