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for China Doll Kitsune

by WithoutAWord

person Reneigh D.J.
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was sad, yet so freakin awesome at the same time XD! I hope you write more SasuNaru in the near future ^-^!
person Bookworm51485
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well Sasuke's a psycho. Hmmm... I thought it was good, a bit creepy but good. I did notice a few mistakes though. I'd suggest finding someone to run through the story for you to fix those little mistakes. I had one question though, is this a one-shot or is there going to be some kind of continuation?