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for Whiplash

by wintersoul166

person drivven
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I'm dying. That was too funny! Thanks for the pick-me-up!
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha. Ino got what she deserved.
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was adorable :p
person Anna
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WTF?! It was way incomplete, I'm between loving it or hating it, that beta will certainly make you very good
person Cake
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was great. And your writing style is so well done. I hope you write more of these stories!
person Zrina
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok, that was just great !!!
person Neko-Chan
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XDDDDD!!!!!!!!! that was freakin awesome!!!
person Mimi Hyuuga
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it a lot! Very originial, cute, short, and hilarious. All positives here ^_^ awesome work!
person DreamWyvern
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I lol, I lewl, I love!

I was seriously Laughing Out Loud over here! Way to tell an old story in such a way that I only just now realized it's been done dozens of times.

Witty, great rhythm, not a bit longer or shorter than it needed to be. Methinks you could tell us any tale at all and it'd be GREAT. I hope to see you do more here on AFF!

- DeeDubya
person Mel
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was soooo funny. I loved it.