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Ah...Haku. I wish so much more had been done with Haku in the series. That is a character that is in need of becoming a precious person to someone strong and NICE. Didn't like Zabuza. Sigh. Can't wait to see what you have coming in the next arc! Looking forward to Naruto and Sasuke's relationship evolving and becoming closer. ;-D

Right now Naruto seems very VERY innocent. Does he have any concept of *adult* relationships? Or is it that he doesn't see it in relation to himself?

Overall, I am glad that you are interested in making this a long series. I love long evolving plots!

You have over 17 THOUSAND hits on this fic. Um, I think you did a damn well good job of making an impact on AFF.net Hmm...I'm pretty sure I SORT of understood the whole seriouse scene with Kakashi and Jayrai...Oh to hell with what I just said, I didn't get it at all, except for a few phrases here and there...To hell with that too, I didn't understand it at all...and let me guess, you're not going to tell us, but your going to let the plot reveal itself. I hate all you sadistic authors -_- *just kidding XD!!* *mumbles* leaving me hanging most, if not all, the time...

another great chapter! Please continue!!

i would love a side story/chapter about haku going after zabuza. anyway, good chapter. but i do look forward to more of the development of feelings between all your pairs. update soon!!

such a cute chapter . . . hmm, Jiraya is coming to take over Naruto's training? Hopefully he has no plans of trying to take Naruto anywhere . . . maa, I'd hate to see the carnage Sasuke left if he did. Poor Gaara being separated from Lee. They do make the cute couple don't they? That Kakashi is really naughty for an angel . . . why do I have a feeling there will be a jail break reported on the news very soon? It seems to be a turning point in the story. Some new developments back in Heaven, maybe a new spirit beast, new trainers, of course new training for the group. Hmm, is there going to be anyone especially for Neji? Or will the poor boy continue to fight the loosing battle to come between Sasuke and Naruto? Why do I get the idea things are going to start heating up between Sasuke and Naruto? Is it or am I reading something in? Well anyway you have a very cute, fun to read story going on here. Please keep up the good work. Take care.

Im glad you gave Haku a happy ending even if he is gonna bust into a top security prison to get Zabuza out :) Kakashi is so bad!

The new arc you talked about im looking forward too I love the fact you havent rushed or forced Sasuke and Narutos relationship its much better and more rewarding when its taken a bit more slowly.

Oh and im guessing that was Orochimaru and Itachi that Kakashi was angsting over...OH DEAR Sasuke better be carefull now with the ultimate pervert snake guy on the loose and evil? older brother!

Looking forward to ya next update.

This last chapter was so kawaii! I especially liked Naruto's 'seatbelt'. Update!!!

Yay Lee/Gaara moments! Naruto's so cute in your story. It kinda makes me sad that I don't have one of my own! I hope Iruka gives in to Kakashi soon or he might take it out on Sasuke and Naruto ^^

Happy late birthday. My brithday's coming up too. It's april 11th.

I enjoyed the chapter, and am looking forward to the next... I am also enjoying the Lee/Gaara dynamic. Poor Gaara needs love, and Lee has so much to give. Not too long ago I saw the episode where Gaara learned of how his family .... anyway I learned of his sad sad past. I so wish he finds a safe place in another's heart. *wipes a tear away*

I am also looking forward to finding out how Naruto, as a young budding angel, knew he wanted to protect Sasuke.