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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love, i love! please update soon!
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March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoot! Things have been revealed!!! :DDDD
I am inordinantly happy. :B
...I think I had more to say, but I had this PR0N-tastic LiveJournal entry http://sublimeparadigm.livejournal.com/213224.html#cutid1 (copy/paste if you want to be scarred for life by snippets of a disturbing Bleach doujinshi) open in another internet window and it killed my brain when I looked at it.
I should really stop clicking on random LJ entries when I'm writing reviews...
*shrug* Oh well...
Kudos on another good chapter!!
I am inordinantly happy. :B
...I think I had more to say, but I had this PR0N-tastic LiveJournal entry http://sublimeparadigm.livejournal.com/213224.html#cutid1 (copy/paste if you want to be scarred for life by snippets of a disturbing Bleach doujinshi) open in another internet window and it killed my brain when I looked at it.
I should really stop clicking on random LJ entries when I'm writing reviews...
*shrug* Oh well...
Kudos on another good chapter!!
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH Gods!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
I just finished reading this and already found my self [half way through it] in complete and utter love with your amazing writting skills and the awesome trappy story-line!!!!!!!!!!!! (esh... wasn't that a long sentense ;D)
But it's too true to deny! ^.^ The simple fact of portraying our dear and always hyperactive Naruto in the form of a guardian angel... correction, Sasuke Uchiha's guardian angel is already an immediate catch!!!! so, a standing ovation to your always apreciated over flowing imagination!!!!!!! and a suppa' GLOMP! just for good measure ^.-
Now, a couple things I've been dying to say since practically first chapie:
1- Naruto in ultra hyper mood and a serious glomping addiction is just so much fun!! I tell ya' girl, those moments really made my day ;D
2- Sasuke's jealousy kick serious arsses!!!! ^_^ And those slight moments with Naruto's own jealous mode with the staring contest [staring Sasuke and Gaara] was great! can't wait to see our dear angel with more jealousy fits... maybe more with Gaara, or Kiba... or even with Neji!!! xD Taking in mind that sweet naive Naruto isn't very much aware of their rivalery ^_^....
3- Gods... stalker Kakashi on poor Iruka-sensei is... is just... well... You're AWESOME GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!! please, please, I'm really begging you here... MORE MOLESTED IRUKA FOR THE FAN-GIRLS IN ARGENTINA!!!!! xD
4- Shikamaru... Shikamaru is... Shikamaru is AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm dying for you to make the guys leave the onsens... so we can have more Shikamaru!!!! And Shino of course... we don't want Kiba-kun to be left alone ne? ;D
5- When are we going to see more of the annoying stalkers... I mean Sakura and Ino? ^_^ I think they'd be a nice factor to bring out Naruto's "inner beat" [evil smirk inserted HERE] If you get my point **nudges,nudges**
6- I love Akamaru!!!! and Kiba!!! and Lee!!! and even Gai-sensei!!!! You just brought a smile to my face when you made them appear!!!! ^_^ BTW, the pervert in the onsen; I'm not sure but, could he have been Jiraiya? [sp o.O] and if so, or not, what would he be? 'cause if some one like Kakashi can be an angel, It wouldn't surprise me the old perv is there too... **tap. tap** **looks back** **Jiraiya and Kakashi, both with menacing looks and cracking nuckles behind her... one with Itcha Itcha Paradise pickin out of his pocket, and the other with the new PlayBoy magazine still in hand...** **sweat-drop** Ok.... I better be quick with this and finish it already...
But first!!!!! ^_^
I absolutely ADORE the holydays specials!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can't wait for next one! ^.^ May be you don't need to use a holyday, but to give the dear cast a day off... ne? o.O [pout and sad shinny puupy dog eyes] ;P
Anyways; in short [after practically writting a monography o.O] The story is AWESOME! FANTASTIC! AMAZING! GRAT! MARVELOUS! and whatever other magnificaly good compliments you can think of... Hey! there was another one! MAGNIFIC!!!!!!! ^_^
Hope see ya soon
and sorry for the long review, if it was a little tyring... but hey! it's worth 23, or 24, I don't really remember, chapters of no coments ;D... and a full bar of sugar-flowed chocolate... but that's besides the point ;D
OH, and before I forget, with the Zabuza topic: When you said he will be there, but not there... can I guess it has to do with a Flash Back of Haku's past, and the reason why he's so sad, and wanted to forget...? o.O
OK so... that was all!!! I think... ¬¬ ... well, If something comes to mind I'll have to wait to review next chapie.
Ultra Suppa Duppa Mega Good Bye GLOMP!!!!! ^_^ Love ya' Girl!!!!!!!
I just finished reading this and already found my self [half way through it] in complete and utter love with your amazing writting skills and the awesome trappy story-line!!!!!!!!!!!! (esh... wasn't that a long sentense ;D)
But it's too true to deny! ^.^ The simple fact of portraying our dear and always hyperactive Naruto in the form of a guardian angel... correction, Sasuke Uchiha's guardian angel is already an immediate catch!!!! so, a standing ovation to your always apreciated over flowing imagination!!!!!!! and a suppa' GLOMP! just for good measure ^.-
Now, a couple things I've been dying to say since practically first chapie:
1- Naruto in ultra hyper mood and a serious glomping addiction is just so much fun!! I tell ya' girl, those moments really made my day ;D
2- Sasuke's jealousy kick serious arsses!!!! ^_^ And those slight moments with Naruto's own jealous mode with the staring contest [staring Sasuke and Gaara] was great! can't wait to see our dear angel with more jealousy fits... maybe more with Gaara, or Kiba... or even with Neji!!! xD Taking in mind that sweet naive Naruto isn't very much aware of their rivalery ^_^....
3- Gods... stalker Kakashi on poor Iruka-sensei is... is just... well... You're AWESOME GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!! please, please, I'm really begging you here... MORE MOLESTED IRUKA FOR THE FAN-GIRLS IN ARGENTINA!!!!! xD
4- Shikamaru... Shikamaru is... Shikamaru is AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm dying for you to make the guys leave the onsens... so we can have more Shikamaru!!!! And Shino of course... we don't want Kiba-kun to be left alone ne? ;D
5- When are we going to see more of the annoying stalkers... I mean Sakura and Ino? ^_^ I think they'd be a nice factor to bring out Naruto's "inner beat" [evil smirk inserted HERE] If you get my point **nudges,nudges**
6- I love Akamaru!!!! and Kiba!!! and Lee!!! and even Gai-sensei!!!! You just brought a smile to my face when you made them appear!!!! ^_^ BTW, the pervert in the onsen; I'm not sure but, could he have been Jiraiya? [sp o.O] and if so, or not, what would he be? 'cause if some one like Kakashi can be an angel, It wouldn't surprise me the old perv is there too... **tap. tap** **looks back** **Jiraiya and Kakashi, both with menacing looks and cracking nuckles behind her... one with Itcha Itcha Paradise pickin out of his pocket, and the other with the new PlayBoy magazine still in hand...** **sweat-drop** Ok.... I better be quick with this and finish it already...
But first!!!!! ^_^
I absolutely ADORE the holydays specials!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can't wait for next one! ^.^ May be you don't need to use a holyday, but to give the dear cast a day off... ne? o.O [pout and sad shinny puupy dog eyes] ;P
Anyways; in short [after practically writting a monography o.O] The story is AWESOME! FANTASTIC! AMAZING! GRAT! MARVELOUS! and whatever other magnificaly good compliments you can think of... Hey! there was another one! MAGNIFIC!!!!!!! ^_^
Hope see ya soon
and sorry for the long review, if it was a little tyring... but hey! it's worth 23, or 24, I don't really remember, chapters of no coments ;D... and a full bar of sugar-flowed chocolate... but that's besides the point ;D
OH, and before I forget, with the Zabuza topic: When you said he will be there, but not there... can I guess it has to do with a Flash Back of Haku's past, and the reason why he's so sad, and wanted to forget...? o.O
OK so... that was all!!! I think... ¬¬ ... well, If something comes to mind I'll have to wait to review next chapie.
Ultra Suppa Duppa Mega Good Bye GLOMP!!!!! ^_^ Love ya' Girl!!!!!!!
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah, just what i needed after a long trip back to college. this was very revealing, thanks for it. ahaha
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March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know what? I'm going to let you in on a little confession, when you started this fic I had high doubts about how this would turn out. When you first started your chapter I didn't believe it...and I thought it was way too fast paced...and I in general didn't like it at all...but then you started going deeper into the story and now here I am...one of your many avid readers waiting to get her/his hands on your latest work...You sieze to amaze me XD! So yea, that's my confession...and now I am proud to say that I love your story! and that I am one of your fans!
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March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Naruto is adorable, and a smiling, hugging Sasuke? That's hot. BTW, your Naruto reminds me of a story I used to read to my kids when they were little, called "The Littlest Angel". Small, blond, tried so hard to do things right but always seemed to mess things up. Always getting into trouble because of it. I love your blond angel; he's just too kawaii!!
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
phew! i just sat and read this entire series so far and i must admit that you have stunned and amazed me. i, for some strange reason, have put reading this fic off several times before, but man am i glad i finally picked it up! everything from character portrayel to the intense scenes is detailed exquisetly! although i do hope naru-chan gets a little bit more common sense, maybe kyuubi can help with that. and a little more backbone! overall, great fic and can't wait for more!
=direchan
=direchan
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My poor cut-out... ;n;
I loved this chapter xD I kept checking back to see if you updated, and I was really chuffed when you did! I really enjoy your story, it makes me laugh and never fails to put a smile on my face xD
Not only bad Neji, but EVERYONE is in trouble xD -gives Naruto a pillow-
I loved this chapter xD I kept checking back to see if you updated, and I was really chuffed when you did! I really enjoy your story, it makes me laugh and never fails to put a smile on my face xD
Not only bad Neji, but EVERYONE is in trouble xD -gives Naruto a pillow-
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hate you....I HATE YOU BECAUSE YOU GOT A NINJA HEADBAND AND NOT ME!!!!!!!curse my cable company! It had to quit on me at the last minute. anyways great chapter! I love your work! keep updating! hmph at least I still have my Inuyasha plushie.:hugs inu plushie:
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Kakashi explained the situation to Sasuke. And I'm surprised that Sasuke admitted that he and Naruto are lovers. How will Naruto take this news? Hurry with the next chapter!!