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for Angel's Touch

by ArtemisSensei

person CommGonn
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay update! =D
Like the little background on Kakashi, what happened to Rin though?
Update soon ^_^

-Self declared #1 Fan, Kenneth
person ClosetEmo
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay your back I hope you had a great birthday!

I turned 20 this year too in January.Its kinda sad not being a teenager any more...

Errrrrr anywayz I love this chapter finding out about Kakashi and the sharigan was intresting.And I could easily imagine Sasuke becoming like Kakashi when he is older reading dirty books (yaoi though of course)because I really believe the most quiet ones are allways the biggest pervs !

Poor angel Naruto he wont be innocent that much longer will he...
Looking forward to future updates :)
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read this chapter yet, and I will tomorrow night and review then, but I saw that it was your birthday a few days ago. Happy Birthday! Yay for 20! I'd like to write you something in honor of it, if you want, so let me know if you have any unfulfilled fangirl desires. XD
person Magic Knight Of the Sky
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BWAHAHAHA! Naruto forgot to tell Neji and Kiba! Hehehe! He's so cute! I wish I had a little brother like him!
person Onawa
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying reading this story! I love the long (good) ones! You have including 3 of my favorite pairings: Sasunaru, IruKakashi, and ShinoKiba. "Bug Man!" (that is just so funny! Poor Shino) The only critique I have are occasional word choice issues (to/too)(choke)(chock)

I would love to see Naruto take the initiative in a more intimate relationship with Saske. That would be the cutest *hot* thing! Sasuke is turned on, but not quite sure if he should take advantage of the situation, cause Naru is "pure". Naru angel starts to get alittle tearfully upset, is sorry that he might be doing something wrong. Saske expresses his concern about Naru being from heaven, Naru counters by saying what would heaven be like if one couldn't make love?

Oh- Wait this it your story! So sorry! I'll have to make my own...

Would love to see a bit more smut, please. even a bit more tentative smut that would eventually lead to the WoooHOOOO smut.

Looking forward to future chapters!
person yuri-san
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^_^ That special was so cute and funny! I enjoyed it very much! :D
I was seriously WTFing (and laughing like crazy) during the beginning. I must have had the weirdest expression on my face ...good thing no one was around to see. ^.^;;;
Sorry, Naruto, sorry-- you're not stupid, just imaginative. (*cough*and really, really dense*cough*) >>;;; *run from angry Naruto*
The Shino / Kiba was cute-cute-cute-cute-cute!! I love that pair!^_^ There needs to be more of them. *pout*
I loved it when Itachi got the cardboard cutouts at the end! You can have my cutout any day, Itachi! ^///^ *fangirling*
person dana
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i so happy knowing that itachi has my cut-out that i am going to be sending you mad cookies and muffins. i always enjoy your specials and this one is no exception. not rushing but can't wait for the next update. and if possible you could pair itachi with sai (pretty hot huh).
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
here i am, reading this at four in the morning, trying REALLY hard not to wake the whole apartment up with my uncheckable laughter. that whole DIC U prank had me in stitches. and poor iruka! if you don't mind, tell him i didn't want to take kakashi away from him, merely share... ah, but that was hilarious as well! *wonders why her cutout being strangled was hilarious* no, seriously, this was so flipping funny! thank you very much for writing and sharing it!! (are you doing one for saint patty's day? all of those guys drunk would be pretty damn funny...) ^.^
person CommGonn
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Shadow: MEMEME! PICK ME! *jumps up and down waving hand* "
I'm hoping Shadow actually said that in his review as opposed to you making a cardboard cutout jump up and down o_o;;;

Anyways, great chapter, hurray to me for getting the first nosebleed of the chapter. xD
Also loved the beginning DIC U plot =P.
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! Haha, thanks for this. Made my day easily. ::glomps back::

Favorite parts:
-Artemis: THE FROOT LOOPS!!!
-Artemis: You knew our true identities all along…spy of the enemy!!
Waiter: THAT IS CORRECT!
-Lee: Again, Artemis-chan’s wisdom is unquestionable.

Lee sure is an ever-present loyal sidekick, huh? ::wants one::
Thanks so much for doing this for everyone! XD