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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am not a member and do not wish to become one,so when I found out we had to log on in order to reveiw I was OUTRAGED!But then I found out that some other member's didn't agree with that rule either so they let some ppl reveiw without having to log on ^^ I was so happy to find that you didn't agree with the rule either! So anyways BACK TO PRAISING YOUR WORK OF ART!! I LOVE scenes that make me go to the edge of my seat and curse my slow reading (I'm a VERY slow reader) and what you did was just that!! IT's so VERY rare that that happens. And you're one of the...what was it...Five ppl who've succeded. *claps* Congrats on that!! Questions!!:
1.For Artemis)Do you plan on making ANY smut at all for our pairs?? *I mainly mean Sasuke and Naruto*
2.For Sasuke)You BASTARD! I heard what you said me at the last meeting! And now I'm going to ask you an EMBARRASSING QUESTION! Did you get turned on when you saw naruto in those robes?? I mean...They were so THIN! You could almost see right through them *Revenge is sweet when served cold...or hot take your pick...*
3.For GAARA) I've been meaning to ask you something...If you could go back to your past and change it...Would you?? And what would you change??
P.S. I forgot to wish you good luck on your flash action scripting!
1.For Artemis)Do you plan on making ANY smut at all for our pairs?? *I mainly mean Sasuke and Naruto*
2.For Sasuke)You BASTARD! I heard what you said me at the last meeting! And now I'm going to ask you an EMBARRASSING QUESTION! Did you get turned on when you saw naruto in those robes?? I mean...They were so THIN! You could almost see right through them *Revenge is sweet when served cold...or hot take your pick...*
3.For GAARA) I've been meaning to ask you something...If you could go back to your past and change it...Would you?? And what would you change??
P.S. I forgot to wish you good luck on your flash action scripting!
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The one above this posting is mine by the way (Stupid me forgot to put my Name)
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to review. Again. :( I'm just really bad like that, I guess.
Mm, I can't wait for a lemon! And I mean that in the most patient, grateful-for-your-writing sense possible. This chapter was great with the explanation for Gaara. It's nice to have that. I forget, is this going to be a LeeGaara story? Or just hints? It seems like there could be hints, or both hints and lemons, really. And I know I've said it a million times, but your Lee is love. ::bows down::
I'm excited to see the next chapter! :D
Mm, I can't wait for a lemon! And I mean that in the most patient, grateful-for-your-writing sense possible. This chapter was great with the explanation for Gaara. It's nice to have that. I forget, is this going to be a LeeGaara story? Or just hints? It seems like there could be hints, or both hints and lemons, really. And I know I've said it a million times, but your Lee is love. ::bows down::
I'm excited to see the next chapter! :D
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February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your story so far! The AU is a really interesting concept and I can't wait to see what happens to Naruto...one thing that's been really distracting is your grammar, though; there aren't a lot of mistakes but one thing I've noticed is your use of 'to' instead of 'too', as well as a few misspelled words (i.e. staid=stayed)...so if you fix those little typos, it'll make the reading a lot easier!...I'm excited to see the relationships develop and I hope you submit more! ^-^
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January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was gonna review chapter 17 ages ago but I wasent able too because ya have to log in or something.
But now you dont have to log in again thank god!
I really liked finding out about garra and his past the part where he is trying to kill himself but the sand wont let him was so sad hmmm at least now he has Lee to cheer him up now!
I REALLY REALLY wanna find out about whats happend to poor little Naru and Sasu though.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
But now you dont have to log in again thank god!
I really liked finding out about garra and his past the part where he is trying to kill himself but the sand wont let him was so sad hmmm at least now he has Lee to cheer him up now!
I REALLY REALLY wanna find out about whats happend to poor little Naru and Sasu though.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it a real pain to just review on stories with all the precautions the admin is setting but what the hell you're stories are worth the trouble so here i go...
the history of gaara is very touching and sad, yes... and i can't wait to see what lee would do to make gaara open up to him....
so lets see the check list....
Sasuke/ Naruto (check)
Lee/Gaara (Check)
Kakashi/Iruka (check)
Neji/Hinata (no check)
Kiba/ Shino (no Check)
the history of gaara is very touching and sad, yes... and i can't wait to see what lee would do to make gaara open up to him....
so lets see the check list....
Sasuke/ Naruto (check)
Lee/Gaara (Check)
Kakashi/Iruka (check)
Neji/Hinata (no check)
Kiba/ Shino (no Check)
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, quick review before they kick me off. this was great. gaara's story is so sad!! and thanks for liking my lemons, that makes me feel better about them. ^.^ i promise i'll review more next time... damn daily moment of down time...
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Gaara opened up about his life? Cool!! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you're story's soooooooooooooo god damn good... u shud become a script writer for an anime series.... if only my hands are good in drawing... maybe i could draw ur characters haha... newei... keep it up... (^^,
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, this was kind of troublesome how now I have to actually log in everytime I have to review something... *pokes AFF -_-;;;* Anyways great job, and what is your account name on FF? Or did you stop writing there because of flames?
-Kenneth
-Kenneth