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by ArtemisSensei

person Donedin
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks! Ya.. ok. So Sasuke is not dead but he has the ability that only dead should posess... right. I'll just let you explane that one when the time comes then LOL. And ya, Haku was quite OC but that's ok cause I love him. And a question... humm. How come Naruto doesn't know he is a saint beast? Shouldn't he know? Does he find out?! Ok, that's 3 questions but oh well. Can't wait for the next chapter!! ^_^
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story! I'm amused that Sasuke is now practically a ninja again ^^ I figured that Sasuke got his ability to use chakra and his Sharingan from his near brush with death. But meh. Your story, your plot. I look forward to the next chapter!
person ClosetEmo
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow so the tengu was Haku I did not expect it to be him but im glad it is because I love Haku.Will Zabuza be in the story as well then?

I hope Haku does not meet the same tragic fate as he does in the anime and manga though so I hope you give him a nice ending like becoming Zabuza`s wife or something LOL

I love Sasuke`s and Neji`s fighting over Naruto does that Naruto know how lucky he is to have two hot guys fighting over him like that?

Okay and I have a few things to ask Naruto and co...

1.Naruto who would you like the most to kiss under the mistletoe?
2.Sasuke do you think Naruto would make a good wife?
3.Kiba you seem to be a big dog lover what do think about Shino`s bugs?
4.Neji when you looked at naked Naruto at the hotspring were you pleased with the size of Naruto`s errr ummm biceps?

MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERYONE!
person Anna
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm afraid that you're right, they can't work together for their lifes! Too arrogant to do that.
Ohhhh well, Haku is immune, but I will be surprised if Naruto's whinnes actually affect him.
person Damp
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow...didn't see that coming (laughs) i was totally thwarted when i read it was Haku... i was like 'whoa...rewind!!' but anyway's i LOVE how the story is going...and the fight scene was just SOOO CUTE@!!(how can ppl beating the pupl out of each toher be a cute site) okay here r my QUESTION!!
1. Do we have to have a battle to the death to determine who is going to have the PRIVLIAGE of topping Naruto? *COVER PURE LITTLE NARUTO"S EARS!!*
2. Is little Naruto EVER going to understand what the word 'SEX' means?? cuz i was really curiouse...how in the last (conversation with the gang)every time something perverted or close to the word SEX everyone covered poor little Naruto's ears??
3. When will Naruto discover that Sasuke and Neji have FEELINGS for Naruto...more then just friendship for him??
last but not least
4. THIS ONE IS FOR SASUKE AND NEJI...GET A GRIP YOU TWO!! AND STOP TREATING NARUTO AS IF NARUTO WAS A 'THING' HE HAS A RIGHT TO SAYING WHO HE WANTS TO BEND OVER FOR!! (she has no shame) NOW STOP THE FIGHTING...AND STARTING MAKING NARUTO SWING TO YOUR SIDE...that way it will be easier to make Naruto bend over for you *huge grin is plastered over her face* (she really has no shame...i'm so sorry to say that i'm her brain...)
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that surprised the hell outta me! haku! who woulda thought? well, you obviously. lol

i'm sorry, but neji just needs to face facts. naruto is sasuke's, plain and simple. but, yeah, i liked this chapter very much ^.^

and a question, huh? um, kakashi: will you marry me? (i'll totally let you do iruka on the side) ^_____^
person Sama
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well it is about a week before christmas! LOL but I loved your chappie!!! That was totally awesome just like the last one! Great plot so far! I LOVE IT! LOl. Update soon!
person CommGonn
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice once again :D
I loved the little white talking snow bunny ^_^
Question for Naruto: Would you rather have all the ramen in the world (and no Sasuke) or Sasuke for just one day with no Ramen ever again?

Also, general question: Who do you guys *points at Naruto and Co.* think is uke? o.o

Very nice once again

-Kenneth
person XZanayu
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Sasuke figured out what was happening and got back on track and is on his way to save Naruto. One question though, how did the dog become big as a house when he's just normal sized? Hurry with the next chapter!!
person summerwind
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story!Your's is my favorite.Do you have any suggestions on any good stories?I'd like to know.Well, keep writing!