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for Angel's Touch

by ArtemisSensei

person Donedin
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you updated! Im so happy that you have brought Rock into the story. It's sure going to be interesting here on out. Can't wait to see what you have planned! ^_^
person littleolmee
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol, the scene where Hinate invites them to the spring and Naruto is running around all happy only to turn and ask what a hot spring is had me rolling. . . it's one of those moments you expect to see a tumbleweed roll past everyone as they stare in silents at the simple minded one. Sasuke and Neji's fights are great, you can almost see them playing tug of war with Naruto; though I thought for sure you'd have Naruto say he wanted to share the room with both Neji and Sasuke. Ah new people, such a Gai worthy entrance there. Poor Naruto being called a chibi by Kiba. The story is going very well, keep up the good work. Take care.
person Anna
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! The rest of the crew is showing up!!

I like this chapter sooo much!

I just ccan imagine the faces of the people around Naruto, Sasuke and Neiji when they were fighting above who will get the blond *laughs*
person Painful Silence
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, i really liked that last chapter, especially Gai-sensei ^_^ cant wait for the next one, oh and the pervert spying on hinata wouldnt by chance be Jiraiya, would it? oh one more thing, is Tsunade gonna be in this?
person bloodyrose
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice but it would've been fun to see Iruka there and i CAN NOT wait to how you put kiba and shino together! awsome! but now that i thought about it... if Naruto's with Sasuka who's with Gaara and Neji? how about Lee? with Gaara? hmmm.... *thinks holding the kakashi pulshi*
person Kuu-ish
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"It's definately got wierder.."

Lol. that was brilliant. It made me laugh. And I love how Naruto didn't know what a hot spring was so he kept saying "hot springs" With the 's'. How cute. XD!!! Yay!
person The Kitsune Thief
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha! This is awesome! Silly Lee, he makes me giggle. And Hinata is sooo totally lucky...*sob*
person CommGonn
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice, poor hinata, surprised that she didnt get a nosebleed =P

-Kenneth
person Jadejj
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I see ya getting the whole gang together good luck :D
person Donedin
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES! YES YES YES YES YES! SOOO glad you are feeling better. This post was freakin awesome, loved how you snuck the Sharingan (or whatever) in there. BWA HAHAHA *cough cough* ok.. don't know why im laughing, I don't know what you have in store, but still! The suspense is... uhh... Suspenseful? ^_^ Can't wait for the next post, and mery christmas!