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for Angel's Touch

by ArtemisSensei

person Rasengan22
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Squeeeeee that was so fun and just what I needed after all the angst I've read/written this week! Gyah. A vacation is just perfect. Sometimes stories get all stifling cuz you can't change the scenery so easily so a vacation is perfect. Ahaha. My SasuNaru heart was happy because of all the Neji/Sasu glaring and Sasu grabbing Naruto's hand all over the place and Naruto being cute and flashing everyone! It's great to have new characters, too. Did you ever wonder what happened to that turtle that tagged along with Lee and Gai when they first met Team 7? Random. Kiba's cute in this already. LOL except as soon as you said they were rivals I was like hmm... it made me realize how much I love that they're rivals in the real anime (Naruto and Sasuke I mean). COOL COOL. So is Jiraiya gonna be a tenguwhatzit. I was gonna ask if Temari was but when you said hermit and since Jiraiya had been there. I like this so much. It makes meh so happy when it updates cuz it's usually light but cute and I like all the personalities... alrighty. ja!
person 123
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't get enough of this story YEAH (good guy pose)
person DaedricFire
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You better write more chapters! Neji and Sasuke fighting over Naruto is one of the sweetest things, I just love a Fight for Narutos love! XD
person Everlasting Skies
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeeeeek! Lee! Now he and Gaara can get it... ugh hrmm ::cough cough:: have fun :D That was a quite amusing chapter but ended before I realized it(nooo!). I hope for lost more action in the next chapter! And though I do not own the Gravitation Remix mangas I have seen some pages from them, I think it was the Hiro/Suichi paired one XD twas Very funny!
Please update soon! And I hope you're all better!

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Full Moon
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(note: the somewhat randomness i always end it with...)
person Passing Reader
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I dident mean your Gaara is bad!!!! I like your Gaara!!! I just thought you wanted him to be...well...more Gaara ^^; I thought that was what you had said? Im sorry ^^; I'll be good and shutup now...sorry again!
person Everlasting Skies
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think you did really good with the basketball part! I could feel the tension! lol But I was sad the chapter was over sooo quickly! Wahhh! I hope you write more soon!

And now that I think about it, the Shuichi/Hiro pairing would probably be really cute (since it's already really cute and they're just friends) plus, wayyyyyy less complicated! That story is... sometimes on crack! lol but hey, who doesn't love the giant panda and crazy image japanese people have for americans? (K and um... that girl who owns the panda... forget her name...)

Hope to see lots of fluff in the coming chapters!
~Everlasting Skies~
person Jadejj
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The cursed Sharingan that a good one :D The normaly it's a gift good chapter
person Anon
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm scared, you're scaring me. I almost didn't read the chapter I was that scared. Sad... ending? Even if it's the first part! Blah I still haven't recovered from ThreeAlls. Oh well, I won't wig out yet, but gah. I thought it was fluff. Although you said the second part if you split it up would be happy... oh god though, I'll cry a river if Sasuke gets trained to fight with the good guys and then suddenly goes off with the bad guys. Waah. I already get that in the manga. That aside, this was cute. I like a jealous Sasuke, so I thought Neji asking out Naruto was... fun. Although I would've liked to have seen Naruto's reaction to Neji asking him out. I think Naru would've been so confused and cute!

But, I did really like the way Sasuke developed his sharingan. Ahh makes me think back to the first episodes and those were my favorite! I just really liked the way you described it at the point where his eyes hurt and how his hands moved toward the ball. Right away I knew what was going on and yet I hadn't expected it. Glad you're feeling a little better!
person Anna
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke is jealous, Sasuke is jealous! ahem, sorry for the childish rant, but I couldn't help it!

Sharigan!! Ohhhhh, I surely hope that you'll write that ^^

Ja ne!
person Yuri-san
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gah! *wracks brain* WHAT is Sasuke! I have no idea and I have a feeling that it's completely futile for me to even guess...=_=
X3 As soon as I get around to it (ie. when hell freezes over -I'm so good at procrastinating *holds up procrastination trophy*) I am SOOOOO gonna draw a chibi picture of Naruto, Gaara and Sasuke in kyuubi, tanuki and kitty PJs!! XD (and I'll even trow in Lee if he's in the story by then XD)
FUN STORY!! I'M SO HAPPY THAT YOU EVEN HAVE THE FUTURE STORY OUTLINE PLANNED!! Notwithstanding an act of God, maybe now there'll be a story on aff that actually updates regularly. XP