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for Angel's Touch

by ArtemisSensei

person Splooosh in a Ramen bowl!!!
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! your not updating too fast your updating too SLOW!!!! fluff! fluff!! fluff!!! FLUUUUUUUUUUUFFFF!!! and story BUT FLLLLLLLLLUUUUUUUUUFFFFFFFFFFF!!!!!!!!! *hugs your leg* fluffiness pweeeeez...*puppy eyes* pweeeeeeeez!!!!
person Donedin
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
drama/fluff/action/humor rollercoaster?? But I love rollercoasters, and I love storys... so logicly putting the two together should make somthing AMAZING right?! And I love how you made Kakashi try and be so inocent with the whole evil pervert thing. Awesome. And how is that Sasuke cough ^_^! :D What is this about no info on everyones fave green beast jr.?! Im dying to know about him and what you have planned. Can't wait for the next post! ^_^
person Passing Reader
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Read your note at the top about not being able to get Gaara into character and I have a recomendation! I really hope you havent read this yet b/c I had to go all the way threw 22 pages of fics to find this *laughs* I really love this auther, she/he does Gaara/Lee fics and has them both in PERFECT charater!!! *squee* It might help you out a bit its here
http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544200885
Just throw that in your address bar and it should take you right to it, the auther is Maldoror if this dosent work, they even have sequils *mad squees* Really great auther, definatly a must read for GaaraXLee fans ;p Now im going to read the next chapter since my mission is complet, sorry if you have already read these fics ^^' Though I hoope I helped just a little ^^'''
person CommGonn
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kakashi... school nurse.... *shudders*
Anyways, KakaIruka scene was good, Kakashi was perfect.
Good job once again =P
-Kenneth (expects a 1 day update xP j/k)
person innerchild
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'll definitely agree with you on gaara being cute in his pj's! naruto sounded adorable too.... too bad naruto didn't get some pj's for sasuke. i have no idea what he'd wear... but it'd be worth paying money to see him in something that had tails and ears. anywho, i can't wait for the next chapter. i'm glad that this story is going to be looooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnggggggggggggggggg! sounded like it anyway, when you said you had stuff planned or outlined for up to ch. 25! gah... i've never reached that many chapters in any of my stories, and probably never will. but whateva.

please update soon!

-inc
person Nomme de Plume
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
all these stories should be put under "mystery" rather than "male/male." *hmphs in a corner* naw, this chapter, it seems, is leading us into the heart of the story. i'm looking forward to figuring out what the hell's going on ^____^ update soon!
person Everlasting Skies
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I thought Sasuke's element would be lightnign... Oh and hehehe, thats so cute! (the three Naruto's) Sasuke's lucky! I wish I had one. And Gaara does sound awfully cute in those pjs you described. I've seen Naruto's and he sure is cute in them! Just makes you want to pinch his cheeks before glomping him XD He's tooo cute! But I just recently started reading Gravitation and your story now kinda reminds me of it. I don't know if you've read/seen gravitation but I mean the I hate you act (but actions show love) and glomping :D awesome-ness either way ! love it, please continue!

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Blue Skies
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person vixenia
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XD you have no idea how much i love your stories. please update this soon. its now on one of my fave naruxsasu mental list
person BrokenSouledPoetess (NSI)
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And sqeaul it did! I think Gaara would just be adorable pouting.
person innerchild
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah, sasuke grew his balls back! makes me happy now that naruto is happy. gaara is so cute in this... which is not something i'd usually say. i've never really had the urge to hug him as much as i do with this story. and he just arrived! oh well, great job. can't wait until the next chapter.

-inc