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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An unexpected twist? What the heck is Gaara, if he's not a demon or a vampire? How weird. I'm still waiting to find out why Naruto got so attached to Sasuke in the first place...did he know him while he was living? This is the first chapter that's really raised any questions in my mind...the story is getting good now! And it's awesome if it's a long story! Hopefully you'll keep up the good work. Update soon, please!
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*blushes* sorry. i still have ill feelings about manga!Sasuke, so it transfers into stories when he's an ass to Naruto, but I have faith in your Sasuke here... I think. I just feel bad when Naruto's the one that has to give a little more, know what I mean? Aww this part was so fluffy sweet. Not in a bad way. I like the affect Gaara has on Naruto, and I like it even more that they're going to be roommates. Hmm... I bet Sasuke when he comes around will be a lil' bit jealous, and especially if he like walks in on Gaara biting Naruto. Aww though. I love when I come home and there are updates for this. LOL but yeah, it's hard to ever write when there are so many updates to read!!!
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great up dates... but please! do NOT pair Naruto up with Gaara... not that i have anything against that pairing but i like him better with Sasuke, well they can be brothers or like such and if, and i'm only saying IF.. can you put something maybe a half chapter even 1/4 that has Iruka/KaKashi smut *looks up at you with puppy dog eyes* and then some shino/kiba as well... GREAT STORY! keep it up ^_~ (Boooo Neiji!)
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CHEESE!!!
GAARA!!!
I'm gonna need a minute to spazz out here. XD
O_O ... A sand castle... XD lmao Only Naruto would think of that. XD ish so cute!
GAARA!!!
I'm gonna need a minute to spazz out here. XD
O_O ... A sand castle... XD lmao Only Naruto would think of that. XD ish so cute!
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! Gaara has a friend!! xD ooooooo....i wunder wut sasuke's gonna do when he see's gaara living with naruto O.O SQWEEEEEEE, UPDATE! UPDATE!! UPDATE!!!!
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sweatdrop* 0.o'
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^__^ I liked this chappy! XD
I think you're right about the whole "can't go strait back to fluff" thing, I don't think it would've ruined the story or anything but, this was a nice change.^^
Gah.0_0 Neji called Sasuke an ass hole a lot! XD
What the hell has gotten into Sasuke anyways? =/ If I had to guess, I'd say he's trying to protect Naruto.
And you KNOW I wanna know who's in that cafe. It's someone Naruto knows so that's interesting, but WHO.
*ponders*
Waah! *gives up* It's probably Orochimaru or something...
I think you're right about the whole "can't go strait back to fluff" thing, I don't think it would've ruined the story or anything but, this was a nice change.^^
Gah.0_0 Neji called Sasuke an ass hole a lot! XD
What the hell has gotten into Sasuke anyways? =/ If I had to guess, I'd say he's trying to protect Naruto.
And you KNOW I wanna know who's in that cafe. It's someone Naruto knows so that's interesting, but WHO.
*ponders*
Waah! *gives up* It's probably Orochimaru or something...
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! ::jumps for joy:: fast update! And now Gaara's in the picture! I hope Lee comes soon XD!!! Cant wait for more! Sasuke's mind is always interesting to read about. But whats up with Neji? Does he have a 6th sense or something?? Poor him.
~Blue Moon~
~Blue Moon~
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY UPDATE/GAARA :)
now maybe sasuke can stop taking naruto's lovie-ness (my new word) for granted =)
so everyone can appreciate naruto more now that gaaras hogging him =P
now maybe sasuke can stop taking naruto's lovie-ness (my new word) for granted =)
so everyone can appreciate naruto more now that gaaras hogging him =P
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha! *dances* I knew it was Gaara! I love that redhead. Another great chapter here.