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for Angel's Touch

by ArtemisSensei

person Donedin
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOOT! BOOYA, Gaara in the house! Freakin love that guy. HAHAHA O.o wonder how Sasuke is going to react to THIS?! And man am I ever wondering what Gaara is... is he supposed to be one of those saint beasts? Cause that would be cool. Can't wait for anther post! ^_^
person Miko hanyou
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was expecting to be him. Yea, i'm happy and anxious about the next chapter.
person kawaiicrimsonkitsune
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome chap! And what exactly is Gaara I must know!?! And It would so totally rock if you changed it into a gaanaru/narugaa fic instead of a sasunaru. I'm a sasunaru fan but they're SO many fics with that couple and not enough gaanaru/narugaa. Well please update.
person Carla
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm...Someone much worse...hmmmm...Who could that be? The only one worse than Gaara that I can think of is Oro but that would be yucky...Puting the beautiful angel with the king of demons. 'Cause Oro would have to be one, right? Of course there is Itachi but he is dead. This will really puzzled me until you let us know. Seriously, Oro just could not be an angel; that would be just wrong. Well, he could be the angel Lucefer...Sorry, rambling here. Anyway, who is the guy that made Naruto react that way at the end? Is it Sai? Is he the you know who? Thanks for your fast update! Do it again please! Love the story btw!

Carla
person damionwright
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the Halloween special. It made me laugh so hard a tear fell from my eye. Oh yea... is the waiter Sai? It just if I was Neji, that's what I would say to Sai.
person rasengan22
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
>.< dammit Sasuke, you're such an ass! I can't believe after all that he said those things to Naruto, he better have a freaking good ass excuse, because even if Naruto's a sweet little angel those were really harsh, harsh words. I think Naru should give up on Sasuke and go for Neji or next mysterious person to show up. I am so upset! Waaah. Your Halloween special was cute, too, BTW. Stupid Sasuke!
person Donedin
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.o! Im sorry Kakshi!!! We all know that you love Iruka but you just had some kind of chem, with Michale ^_^. Don't be mad! At least you get makeup sex xD. I like the fact that you respond to our reviews but post STORY damnit! ^_^ ill be waiting... and yes it was cheesy.
person bloodyrose
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
my dear i know that you enjoyed making the halloween special and honsetly, it made me smile but i really wished you'd continue on your updates *smiles softy*
now lets see, about Naruto being 'innocent' it cute and reminds me of Chi from chobits and that girl from angel tales (even Ginji when he glomps Ban)(10/10)
Sasuke all jealous and that is also cute (8/10)
Action scene (10/10)
Kakashi and Iruka Paring? i'm a little biased because i simple LOVE that paring id give you a 100. a slight request please don't make kakashi TOO much of a pervert. i'd feel sorry for poor Iruka, he's always considered as the Uke *pats Iruka's shoulder* It simply isn't fair.
And i also adore Shino/Kiba pairing.
Sakura and Ino can just F@%#$ Off. unless they get killed slowly and painfully *smiles innocently*
All in All a very wonderfully put story, keep up the good work and please update soon for your readers
person commgonn
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice, I LOVE YOUr sense of humor :D
also very good story + halloween special
person Anna
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Who is the waiter! Who!! I can beleive it, a cliffhanger!
Neji was soo sweet at Naruto! Maybe he wants him to be his guardian angel, and I can tell when someone has a crush when I see him, well more like read him in this case ^^
Please update soon!