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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!! ^_^ Can't wait for more!
OMG, why does Neji have snake eyes! O_o I did NOT see that coming.
(sorry, pressed for time, can't leave a long review right now. ^^;;)
OMG, why does Neji have snake eyes! O_o I did NOT see that coming.
(sorry, pressed for time, can't leave a long review right now. ^^;;)
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ack! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Fox pajama pita ten style eh? I'm so drawing that. If my scanner wants to work with me, can i send it to you as a fanart?
Fox pajama pita ten style eh? I'm so drawing that. If my scanner wants to work with me, can i send it to you as a fanart?
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nani??
What's happening!!
What's happening!!
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So cute!! I love a scared/panicy naruto!!!! XD But i must say I'm mad! A cliff hanger?! Why did you do it!! that was mean! There for- you must update soon or else no candy for you! Please?
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bleh, I don't know where I was that I missed the last 3 chapters! Aww, I love this story, it's squishy like Charmin toilet paper. I also love a jealous!Sasuke so that was uber cute. I like the idea of Naruto as an angel. The last chapter seemed sort of unexpected, but I suppose you're moving toward more of a plot. I'm excited to read more about Naruto's past! And oh I squeed so much about Naruto being the ramen and Sasuke his ramen bowl. It was sooo sweet. And I loved this line from earlier: A good hint was the cereal bowl in front of him. It contained perfect, unburnt cereal. LOL I can see Naruto burning cereal even in this. And don't worry about the yaoi part. I think it makes sense to take your time what with Naruto being an innocent angel and all and Sasuke not ready to come to terms with his feelings of jealousy! Pressure for some booty can sort of hamper your writing, I think. It's just fine at this pace. XD
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story!
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter! believe it or not, it took me a moment to realize that it was orochimaru, heh heh... such an evil place to cut off. so can't wait for the next chapter! hurry and update!
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must say this is pretty cute. I like what you are doing.
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I really likie your story!! it has a really good plot to it, and seems like it could go really far!!
I support yas 100%!! okays??
If you need anything, lemme know, Ok??
^^ Kira
I support yas 100%!! okays??
If you need anything, lemme know, Ok??
^^ Kira
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cute! but um...yeast? in cake? *sweatdrops* i'll just pretend you said baking powder...lol! thanks, please continue!