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for Angel's Touch

by ArtemisSensei

person Ashe
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is one of my favorite stories on here. I love it! I'm not an author...I don't have the patience to be one...Just a reader. I'm such an avid reader, I stay on the computer all day finding and reading stories that seem interesting. Yours is one of the most interesting and original ones that I've ever read. I really hope you update soon! Stories like yours keeps junkies like me happy! ^_^
person emp78
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet! Lee realizing Gaara's problem and helping him! Where did Kakashi go? To stalk Iruka, maybe? I love this story!
person Mitsuko
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its official...my roomates think im crazy... my random happy dances have them seriously freaked out. Lee is so cute! No, im not blind...in an adorable "omg hes so sweet!" kinda way. Gaara too. I think Lee's past varies in how bad some people may see it. My younger brother was born with autism, and his father wanted him put up for adoption, and to try for another child. Safe to say, him and my mother are no longer together... and you know what that boy is damn near smarter than me! So personally Lee's past is a sad one... It isnt fair to disregard someones life because they arent perfect, to replace them... Some people dont deserve children! Anyway rant over! (Geez im a long reviewer today...) As always i love this story...Though i do wish you had the opportunity to update more often, i may have to check for updates from a metal institution, but itd be worth it! Much luff!
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Lee! *Hugs Lee tightly*
person Kagome Raya
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
These chapters were all good! I read all of them and it took me three days. Would have been two if I didn't have to get offline so much at night. But the last chapter had me laughing so much I'm laughing at just about every sentence! I love this story! One more thing really big favor, when you update go to fan fiction . net and pm me. I don't have an account on here so it would be the greatest thing in the world if you did this one little thing for me please onegaishimasu kudasai!
person niguara_chic
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Blushes madly* uh...yeah,thanks for that information, I kinda figured all that out after a while. I beleive shino has pretty eye too,maybe we'll see them in Naruto Shipuuden. And Kakashi's face as well. Do you think Masashi Kishimoto approves of SasuNaru...I mean come on! He's really pushing for it! There are so many signs...like the Wave country arc and Sasuke retreival arc..I'm just saying. Anyways enough of my ranting, great chapter as always.Keep up the good work!!
person Gwyllion
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahahah...just finshed your latest and what a wonderful read. Thank you once again for sharing this. Your Sasunaru are so cute together. Especially when they fight. More please! :D
person Damp
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I know game maker. *You do make games right?* Crap...Sakura scared me O.O. I couldn't believe Naruto and Sasuke actually RAN from her. Yea, I can't wait for Naruto and Sasuke to get their 'alone time'. *That will be coming up soon right?* Anyways, I loved what you did with Shino and Kiba, they deserve each other ^^ (Although I also agree with KibaHina or ShinHina.)Can't wait for your next update!

-Damp
person Yuri-san
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*wiggles happily* I RABU Shino/Kiba!!!!!! *3* When Kiba looked onto Shino's eyes, I was like: *melts* (I DON'T CARE IF IT'S CLICHE!!!)

I noticed you didn't tell me if Sai was the seven-tailed beast or not... *looks at you suspiciously*

OMG. They have really never shown Shino's eyes!? That means that episode summary I once read was lying!!! *feels betrayed* It said he had completely black eyes and his clan generally kept them covered so they wouldn't freak people out... (I always DID think that was an odd explanation, what with the Hyuugas running around with their creepy pearly-whites--and I don't mean teeth.)
I bet Aburames' don't have eyes. :| Just bugs.
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm soo glad you updated this chapter was sooooo cool and very funny! Good luck with your 3D Model thing and i'll keep my eye out for the next update!^ ^