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for Angel's Touch

by ArtemisSensei

person Lucia
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hiyas!!!!!!!! ^______^
Glad to see you back!
OH Gods! Their day at the mall was just AWESOME!!!!!!!!! xD
Kiba dragging Shino all around, but most of all: the emo/traffic cone discussion!!!! XD It made me crack ;D
And the last scene between dog-boy and bug-man was SO very MUCH sweet ^.^ It made me squeal! ^_^ [wich got me some wired looks from the people in the cyber-cafe... oh well, they're the ones that are missing this amazing story ;D and when Sakura appeared... just, wow... I couldn't hold in the crazy laugh anymore xD
So, wishes for next chapie... mmmhhhh.... fluff!!! xD lots and lots of fluff! ^____^
Hope see you soon
Ja nE
person Anon
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was too cute, I love shino and kiba!!
person Mitsuko
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Does happy dance* (smiles cutely) i love you! you know that?? you made a happy ending to an otherwise utterly depressing day! As always i love your updates! and sasuke getting kiba back after all his comments about him and naruto...cheeky cheeky!
person littleolmee
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back! Man, real life is such a drag isn't it? All the stuff we got to do just always seems to get in the way of the things we want to do . . . good luck by the way on your schooling hope you pass with flying colors! Game designing that's very neat. I hope to some day buy one of your games you have created! The chapter was very funny. Loved how Kiba reached out to Shino especially at the end, it was a situation I could see in the anime/manga explaining how they made a connection as friends. Naruto and Sasuke interaction is always fun to read . . . just what did Naruto do this time? Wait maybe I don't want to know. . . but I'm sure it will be fun to read! Well thank you for the update, stay strong and keep up the great work. Take care.
person Donedin
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WAH HAHAHAHAHA I am back and reading again! Im sorry that I stoped reviewing but I didn't barly have enough time to read the chappys, let alone type a response. So your in that didgital media class or somthing right? I have 2 friends in that course ^_^. One is a genious, never goes to class and still mamages to get top grades. All his classmates want to kill him and eat his brain ^_^. Good luck and keep on truckin! P.S. I think that shino has cute grey eyes too.
person devil child
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
“Why the hell does everyone assume I’m emo!? I had this style before emos were even emo!!”, was my favorite line.I liked that whole thing where Kiba talks to shino about why he wanted to help them. Also the classic scene where kiba falls on shino is great because it's one step closer till kiba jumps shino.
person bloodyrose
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sweetheart, i love it! but really... you could've upadated it earlier... *pout* any way it's a nice plot with shino and Kiba. they way Kiba reaches out to shino is a good way to make a love blossom and it'd be nice to give Shino a little OOC by acting all fluffy with Kiba like holding his hands while no one's looking and saying a kind word, even a small peck on the cheek would be cute while Kiba is embarassed to death by shino showing his affections. shino after all is experimenting with having someone to love who else to experiment on but kiba and it's nice to see the out come either way I love your story and i cnt wait for more ^^
person Anon
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That Sakura is one crazy bitch!!
person emp78
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious! Loved the argument between Sasuke and Naruto. And the ending, how Naruto was terrified of Sakura, and knocked Kiba into Shino trying to make his escape. lol. Update as soon as you can.
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ATTACK OF THE CRAZY FAN GIRLS!!!!!!! AHHHHH! Hehehe!