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yay! an update! i must say, i did feel kiba was overstepping his bounds with the whole 'drag shino out and change him.' so i'm glad shino stood up for himself. i look forward to their relationship blossoming. see you next chapter!

ARTEMIS SENSEIIII~~~~~~~ WHERE ARE YOU? T____T argh this my favourite story on AFF and yet, and yet your still gone! UPdate please! I beggg you! I'll even sell, no GIVE you FOR FREE my kid brother! take him! just update please! I miss sunshine Naruto and cute Sasuke!!! (oh my, looking back, i realised....what a drama queen I've become....)
By the way, your story rocks! I love it's happy feeling and well plotted plot. And Kaka sensei, who cannot love the man? lol but you know who my fav coupling after Naru&Sasu? BugMan and FleaBoy! What an interesting life they must lead! In the red corner: Boy who loves bugs, in the blue corner: Boy who kills bugs. teehehehe Oh i think its cute how everything is still very cute and innocent between our fav duo. So~~when's all the action between angel boy and the living dead boy going to start huh? *wiggles eyebrows like a man* XD

*3* Shino/Kiba!!! KYAA!!!! *mad huggles for you* omgomgomgomg I LOVE that pair!! Shino's story is saaaad. ;_; *sniffle*

Haku breaking Zabuza out of jail is awesome!! (pfft-- Kakashi, you--completely obvious--sly dog. XD)

Holy cra-- Iruka REALLY got Kakashi arrested!? (What did he do, grope him? XD;;;)Is there no hope for mutual Kaka/Iru love?? ;_; Ah well... Maybe if Kakashi stops acting like a hentai (Just WHAT were they teaching Kakashi in Heaven? o_O) Iruka will give him the time of day. ^^;

Hahaha! The card-game! XD Poor Lee...

I noticed a couple of grammar (or spelling? not sure how to classify it...) mistakes:
“Uh…Gaara-san…have you never partook in a game of Go Fish?”
That should be partaken. Don't ask me to explain why, 'cause I wouldn't know how; I hated studying English because I sucked at remembering the names and clasiffications of things. (Me: "third-person?? What third person? And what is this "predicate" you speak of?" *confoosled*) ^.^;;; But I got really good grades because I was a total bookworm (like, 100 novels a year ^^;). My entire mastery of written language is based on on-sight regognition, so I can look and tell if something is wrong...most of the time. >>;;; heh...
Also, you often use "then" where you should be using "than". (eg. "More then you" should be "More than you".) That is one of the most common mistakes in english, so don't be too down about it. ^^

Thank you for the lovely new chapter!! Oh-- *wild shot in the dark* This "seven-tailed beast" you speak of, could it be Sai? (I know you said you don't know Sai's character well, but maybe you changed your stance on writing him?) Otherwise, I have no clue--but I'll probably kick myself when you reveal who it is. =_=;

Oops... spelled two words wrong:
classification
&
recognition
Normally I wouldn't correct them, but it's a little hypocritical of me, being that I was correcting your spelling/grammar and all. ^^;

This fic is absolutely adorable! I can't wait till the next update. Good storyline here...but when is the smut coming? Heheheh....yay for sasunaru! <333

Nyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!! ^________________^
You just made my day! :D
I loved the "Go Fish" part... Naruto and Gaara... got to lov'em!!!! xD
Kakashi in jaill and calling Sasuke... SASUKE!!!! for help: AWESOME!!!!
And of course: "Bug Man Makeover"? Girl, where does your mind go or do while it's writting this master piece ^.^
Sooooooo kawaii!!! Kiba with guardian angel tendencies xD Poor Shino though...such a nice guy with a lonely past... Can't wait to see the guys literaly dragging him out of "the closet" xD [Kiba's job for sure ;D]
My... some implyed IruKaka YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!
And for the people Ero-sennin [:P, couldn't help my self] and Kakashi were talking about... well, I'm guessing the one that's in Heaven and was trained by ANBU is Sai... and "the other ONE" might be Orochimar? o.O
Anyways... hope see you soon, and have a nice time with your Dad!!! [relax! ;D And come up with ideas for next chapter ;D]
Ja nE carotigna! ^____^

i thought the jailbreak was so funny it would be lovely if you did a side story i think that would be so cute. i liked how you did the kiba and shino scene and how you had akumaru tyring to stop kiba when i was reading it i could just picyure that poor dog thinking and this is the guy who is supposed to be my master i thought it was so cute. i can't wait to see how you do operation makeover ( i bet knowing the way you are writing it is going to be a hoot). i can't wait for the next update.

Since I'm too lazy to actually review each chapter or so. It's interesting and surprising, a few times you've come up with things I didn't except. And the Specials are comic genius. Question: Are you considering doing an Easter Special? The characters could go on an egg hunt and find plastic eggs with reviews/comments in them. Just a thought.

Anyway, great story and update when you can.

hello,

Oh kami, i stumbled upon your story not too long ago and i instantly fell in love. i love the way you portray all the characters escpecially naruto. I do feel really bad for shino though he sounds like he really needs a giant angel group hug, using the same comfort mode naruto used on sasuke. it also warms my heart for what your doing for gaara, he has always been my fav character because he had the bad boy thing going for him but he was the kind of bad boy that love could change unlike itachi who just seemed evil to the core. let's not even get on the subject of orochimaru though the tongue thing totally creeps me out escpecially when he is licking his lips while he thinks of sasuke ::mental shudder::