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The story is very excellent! two thumbs up! oh i forgot to review on the last chapter... JIRAIYA?!! an angel? COme on! he's the king of all perverts! *ahem* anyway It's sad about shino and i'm happy there's finally going to be some shino/kiba going on, and i hope you add some Iruka/Kakashi into that mix ^^ I know this might sound like i'm whinning but lee and gaara's interaction are not very romantic... it's a litle bit of a let down, i dunno maybe it's just me and about zabuza and haku it's very sweet and very funny how sasuke described kakashi being an angel, i know that one of the saint beast have already been decieded but what part does Shino and Iruka play in your story other than love interest to Kiba and Kakashi? this is just me talking but can't you give them more parts to play? that's all and Keep up the good work!!! Update soon okey? ^_^

So far this is pretty interesting. The scene between Naruto and Sakura/Ino about letting go of Sasuke was hilarious.

Shower scene so funny and cute. Personally I love stories that make Naruto innocent and oblivious since the thought of him being depressed doesn’t suit him at all.

*squeal* Naru-chan is so cute! Jealous but in denial Sasuke is amusing. Completely agrees with Hinata about how their differences are what make them such a good match.

Great story.

Nice action scene between Neji and Naruto. It was captivating.

Bloopers were comical.

“Kyuubi Naruto: HEY! No laughing from the dead guy!!!” Heh heh.

Shikamaru cosplaying himself is a good idea in a lazy way. I can totally see him doing that. Everyone sounded cute in their costumes. I feel sorry for the characters eating the *cough* food.

This was beyond funny and the story continues to get better.

Hee, hee . . . it was just too perfect having Haku break Zabuzza out. I'm with Sasuke, what kind of angel is Kakashi? I know one thing; he's MY KIND of angel! LOL. Poor thing he really does like Iruka, huh? That was very funny too; he thought Iruka was just kidding when he threatened to call the cops on him. Who knew it would be so hard to explain a simple game like go fish? So we have a new mission huh? I'll send my condolences to Shino for being the next in line for that crew to 'help' him. Hmm, does Kiba have any other thoughts on why he is so interested in helping Shino? He kept wanting to go back in and speak to him . . . yes I know he is very stubborn and doesn't seem to take 'no well, but it just seemed like maybe he wanted to get to know Shino better in the first place. Thanks for the update, have fun visiting you dad. Hee, hee your not going to be very happy in Indiana right now though; trust me I know being that is where I'm at. It's so cold right now, last week it was in the high 70's now 30-low 40's . . . I was out hidden easter eggs for the elementary kids yesterday and it was spitting snow! Well take care and thanks again.

I hope they know what their doing. Awaiting the next chapter!!

nooo damn it I missed the previous update T_T, I wish there was an alert feature here like on fanfiction =/

Anyways nice chapter, love how Iruka got Kakashi thrown in jail xD

-Kenneth

Great chapter! as always! The kiba and Akamaru interactions were funny in this chapter! But I feel kinda bad for shino.He's way too hot to be lonely,have you seen him without his sunglasses!? His eyes are beautiful!!(Squeals like a fangirl)I'm a big shino fangirl! And Gaara! can't forget about him! But if it is for the sake of the story,then I say go with it. Well I have nothing more to say,so see you in a week,have fun on your vacation!:) Ja ne!