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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Update. Aww, poor Iruka. He's gonna wage war huh...he better be careful what he asks for. I'm glad u finally came to like Sakura. Most of us learn to make that leap. :)
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September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:D I really like this store! Please update soon! I want to see what kind of hell Anko's going to put Naruto in!
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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I stumbled onto this recently and am very intrigued with this story. I love the idea you had about Itachi and the ANBU. If you have an email notification list, please add me on it. I cannot wait to read more!
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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was refered to you by Kimihiro on DeviantART and I must say, I am grateful to her for doing so.
This is a well put together fic and I am looking forward to when you start up-dating it again.
This is a well put together fic and I am looking forward to when you start up-dating it again.
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August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story! I usually follow it on FF.net but since I saw it here with updates...
one sort of rant first: you think Naruto was worse than the average genin... I don't agree with the Naruto not knowing anything: most of the genin we see don't know a lot of jutsus either... I'm pretty sure Sakura only knew the general ones like henge and shadow clone before she started training under Tsunade. you know, the ones taught to every student. and if he was really worse than the avarage genin he couldn't have beaten Gaara and Neji (only the chakra came from Kyuubi...) and while I haven't seen the battle against Sasuke yet I've read he did pretty well there too... and with the tree-walking, water-walking and the Rasengan (which you need chakracontrol for) he's already done, even if the tree-walking and Rasengan weren't up to standard, I don't think his chakracontrol is (that much) worse than the avarage ninja either. not anymore at least... but if that doesn't fit your story... just had to get that off my chest.
I really like the team you have for Naruto... especially Itachi the way he is now. they all want Naruto to learn to love Konoha but Itachi doesn't and I don't think he sees why Naruto should either... will he learn it or will neither? how long will it be until they get together? Naruto was already blushing at least.
and Anko is scary... how will he have energy for the rest of his lessons?! will Naruto get Kyuubi's power back eventually or is that sealed forever?
hope for more soon!
one sort of rant first: you think Naruto was worse than the average genin... I don't agree with the Naruto not knowing anything: most of the genin we see don't know a lot of jutsus either... I'm pretty sure Sakura only knew the general ones like henge and shadow clone before she started training under Tsunade. you know, the ones taught to every student. and if he was really worse than the avarage genin he couldn't have beaten Gaara and Neji (only the chakra came from Kyuubi...) and while I haven't seen the battle against Sasuke yet I've read he did pretty well there too... and with the tree-walking, water-walking and the Rasengan (which you need chakracontrol for) he's already done, even if the tree-walking and Rasengan weren't up to standard, I don't think his chakracontrol is (that much) worse than the avarage ninja either. not anymore at least... but if that doesn't fit your story... just had to get that off my chest.
I really like the team you have for Naruto... especially Itachi the way he is now. they all want Naruto to learn to love Konoha but Itachi doesn't and I don't think he sees why Naruto should either... will he learn it or will neither? how long will it be until they get together? Naruto was already blushing at least.
and Anko is scary... how will he have energy for the rest of his lessons?! will Naruto get Kyuubi's power back eventually or is that sealed forever?
hope for more soon!
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love your stories. and this one is by far the most interesting! Keep going with it!
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story! I really like how it balances seriousness and humor, and makes you think. I think the plot could probably progress a bit faster, although I like the care you take in describing the various steps of Naruto's journey into ANBU. I really like how you made Iruka an ANBU, and how Itachi isn't evil, and also describing the ANBU masks in detail. Thank you for writing!
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think the training would get more intense. Wow. You are doing very well with this. I applaud you. And while i like the training, and it IS very interesting i can't wait to see what'll happen when the OTHER stuff happens lol. May the writing gods be with you.
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I love this story, it's soooo awesome! And this was a great chapter! I hope that you'll update again soon, cause I can't wait to read more! ^^
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story so far, i really like where the plot is going, and i enjoy the chapters you spent on his training. Please update soon :)