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for Colourless Vanity

by Cepheus

schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i just love the way you describe his training sessions. shoot even i feel like im learning stuff too. ^_^ anyway, i look foward to your next update.
person Damp
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Even though I´m a bit late to say how excited I am for the coming out of this chapter, I sure you won´t mind that I reveiw. ^^

Wow, I´m kind of learning a few things from this, everytime you post up a new chapter I get happy because I know I´m gong to learn something for sure. Just like from More Than I Appear´s stories. I´m so happy that Naruto now has a home of sorts and a family of sorts he can count on. So very, very for him ^^

I love how involved Anko is going to be to this fic, I a huge fan of Anko and you don´t really see her in most fic, so I can´t wait to read more of Anko!!

-Damp *Hurray!!*
person akinohanun
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is really good!!!!!!!!!
person NexusW
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your style of writing as, I have expressed previously. It's really fluid and quite easy to follow, and your scenes flow so well together that you get a great contrast and believeablity.

By the way: I just got Diamond too! We can be poke nerds together! I miss first gen. pokemon though but some of the new additions are just plain awesome. Shinx as you said, I think is really cool.
person nah-nah
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read this story some time ago, but I wanted to read it again. I somehow managed to find it without remembering the title or author. Yesterday I read it all, I was wondernig when you will update. Can you imagine how happy I was when I found new chapter? ^^ Thaaank youuuuu :D

The more chapters you're adding, the more interesting the stroy is. I like the style of your writing and the plot. Naruto is getting a hard training, I can't wait to know how he will change after it.
I'll be waiting for next chapters!

(If I made misteakes I'm sorry, but english isn't my first language.)
person darktoy
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I was starting to worry when I got no news about you. But as usual, you have succeded and delivered a very interesting and well made chapter.

KEEP THE GOOD WORK UP!

(BTW: Lovely Anko)
person hpn
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love every chapter of this story. It's so detailed. That was cool how you explained how you can emanate a killing intent.
Thanks for the update. Hopefully we'll see another one soon.
person BiLlIe
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW... ANKO IS EVEN SCARIER THAN ITACHI. SHE IS A CRAZY SADISTIC BITCH BUT I'M GLAD SHE'S TRAINING NARUTO. I REALLY WANT HIM TO BECOME REALLY STRONG. THAT WAS PRETTY INTERESTING ABOUT KISAME. HE'S IN THE LION'S DEN RIGHT NOW.
person Lily
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are simply amazing.
person hplien
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are the greatest Ita/Naru writter.
I really love you for writing this.
I'm really loving the plot of the story.