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FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SOMETHING WORTH READING.

i'm so excited about this story. it's so hard to wait for the next chapter. i'm so impatient because this is just so good. it's really hard for me to get interested in a story but i find myself reading like i want to find out how it ends but not wanting it to end because it's just so beautiful.
thank you. hopefully you update soon.

I'm not seeing Naruto & Itachi's relationship progressing to anything intimate. I really can't wait for that to happen.
I wonder who Sasuke is going to pair up with.

I THINK YOU'RE ONE OF THE GREATEST WRITER SO I WANT TO ASK YOU IF YOU COULD WRITE AN ARASHI/ITACHI STORY. I PERSONALLY HAVE NEVER READ ANY ON THAT PAIR. I SAW SOME PICTURE'S OF ARASHI ON PHOTOBUCKET.COM SO NOW I'M ALWAYS ON A LOOKOUT ON A STORY WITH HIM ON IT.
SOMETHING WHERE HE IS ALIVE AFTER SEALING THE KYUUBI INSIDE OF NARUTO. ITACHI'S CLAN IS STILL ALIVE. MAKE IT INTO A "FORBIDDEN FRUIT" TYPE OF THING. I DON'T KNOW WHY BUT I LOVE STORIES WHERE THERE IS A DRAMATIC AGE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN LOVERS (OKAY MAYBE NOT SO DRAMATIC). IT CAN BE ARASHI/ITACHI, NARU/SASU (SEME NARUTO PLEASE)& KAKA/IRU.

Please write more.. I think this is one of the most inventive stories I've seen. Thank you!!!
Slave

A wonderful chapter as always Ceph ^_^ Brilliant, and I look forward to your next one.. There aren't many good itachi/naru-chan fic goodness so I am really looking forward to seeing how this story works out and where you plan to take it ^_^

Ja ne!

I love it!! ^_^ It is really good, but you desperately need a beta-reader. I would love to volunteer for the job, this story has tons of potential, and it is a great read, but some parts are a bit slow. I find it really fascinating how you go through the training and...I don't know...I guess no one really writes like that. Every one seems to just say "And they trained and Naruto got tired, and then POOF the training is done." But you go into detail, and it makes it really interesting. It almost sounds like you have some experience it ninjutsu yourself ^_^
Neways, all in all, great story, but please do e-mail someone about being a beta-reader. It will just make it flow more smoothly. Have a great day/night, and I hope the muses stay with you! Keep those chapters coming!

OMG, a new chapter! It seems as if I have been waiting for a centry! I really liked the development of this chapter. The characterization of Naruto, Itachi, sasuke,and everyone else; was beautifully done. I look forward to the next chapter, and I hope you update again soon.

Yay i loved it - not too sure if i reviewed before ...

Anywho, i am loving your fic ^^ And can't wait to read the next chapter

I loved the shower sence (that was a chapter or go ... oh well)

Yay review

This chapter seem so 'deep', with Hyoo's view on Itachi and naruto; and then Itachi's view on naruto and lastly, naruto's view on killing and stuff - lots of growth in this chapter ^^ Loved it