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for Colourless Vanity

by Cepheus

person Damp
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cepheus! It´s so good to see you working so hard (??). I´m glad to here that you are currently working on Silent Observer and also are working on a new story, one where it´s Naruto MPreg...I can´t wait!! I lost those stories.

I´m such a lare bloomer, I feel bad for not reviewing earlier/reading this fic.

-Damp *Guilt is eating at my conscience.*
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ciao!! Tata sono Lolly giusto nel caso tu ti chieda chi sono anche se penso ke l'avrai già capito dal commento in italiano! Te lo scrivo in italiano x il semplice fatto che sono immensamente pigra e scrivere in inglese mi deprime! Ok x quelche riguarda la ficcy non c'è ke dire è fantastica! è molto ben scritta tranne qualche errore di grammatica qua e là ma questi sono davvero pochi! Poi vediamo la trama è molto curata ed è molto interessante e poi il pairing è semplicemente divino! Ok dopo tutti questi complimenti ti volevo chiedere ma hai davvero intenzione di fare tutti e tre gli anni di addestramento?! Se si ti dico solo buona fortuna visto che di solito gli allenamenti sono una mazzata per tutti! X il resto ciao e ci sentiamo su msn! Bye bye!
person Eriza
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a good fic!^^ I'm too much addicted to it! I'm even dreaming of this story!XD I hope to read the next chapter soon!^^
Great job! ++
person Bouji
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't Review(Mostly since I am really bad at it). But since you gave me the most detailed and I must say helpful review I ever got on AFF I had to return the favor. Colourless Vanity happens to be the most beautiful Naruto work I have read on AFF. The details and the characterization have constantly been fantastic.

I adore the concept of Itachi and Naruto healing each other. The idea of Iruka as ANBU has also always made me happy. I would have never guessed that English was not your first language.

I'm always so excited to see the next chapter, keep up the good work.
person Ilene
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really like ur story, so deep! I like how the relationship is slowy but surely progressing-please continue and update soon! *gives u a chocolate*
person brin
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story. I've been following it since the first chapter. Of course, it would be much preferred if you update more often
person risarisa
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely fanfic!
person risarisa
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely fanfic!
person risarisa
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely fanfic!
person risarisa
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely fanfic!