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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely fanfic!
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutely in LOVE with this story. It's simply breathtaking how you've managed to take the Narutoverse and spin it into something your own. I admit, i'm anxious for the loving but i like the slow and steady pace you've set for the story.. i keep wanting more more more.. but i don't want it to be bad :P i await patiently for more! especially anxious to know the thoughts of others when its confirmed that Sasuke did indeed try to kill Naruto.. at least i hope its revealed.. a whole new set of drama i imagine because it seems Naruto isn't quite over it just yet.
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I think that Naruto’s and Itachi’s relationship is so sweet. I look forward to future chapters and I can’t wait for things to start seriously developing between them. I Hope that you can update soon! ^^
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
amazing, as always. i was a little confused by the interaction between itachi and naruto at the end of chapter 10, but i have this feeling that you will clear things up before too long. ^_^ you really are a very good writer, though the charaters seem to spend a lot more time thinking and pondering and feeling and noticing than they do actually doing anything. not that this is always bad, it is really cool to see how the charaters percieve (sp?) their situation, and this is a super fasinating story, but i find that i am drifting away from it at times and skimming paragraphs to see if the charaters are actually going to ingage in some kind of activity anytime in the near future. so, perhaps a little more action and a little less internal-thought-process? just a thought, you are the writer, and as i have said, i love this story! it is awesome and makes me all excited. ^_^ thank you so much! i cannot wait for the next chapter! *hug* love you!
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Luv you to pieces! Hope there's move coming soon! Great chapter as always! Luv poor lil' Sasuke and I'm glad you're working Sai in there. I love Sai! Kyyyaa!
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! THAT WAS A LONG CHAPTER & REALLY DEEP. I CAN SEE THE CHANGES IN NARUTO. HE IS NOT SO LOUD & BOISTEROUS ANYMORE. I REALLY LIKE THE CHANGES, TOO BAD IT'S NOT GOING TO BE LIKE THAT IN THE SHOW. I HATE HOW IDIOTIC HE ALWAYS LOOKS IN THE SHOW.
I'M LIKE THAT YOUR STILL WRITING ABOUT SASUKE PART & POV. I THOUGHT YOU WERE GOING TO JUST FOCUS ON NARUTO'S TRAINING IN THE ANBU. THAT'S GOING TO START MAKING ME LIKE SASUKE AGAIN. IT'S NICE TO BRING HIM DOWN A PEG OR TWO. POOR SASUKE THOUGHT.
THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE. YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HAPPY I AM THAT YOUR PICKING UP THE STORY.
I'M LIKE THAT YOUR STILL WRITING ABOUT SASUKE PART & POV. I THOUGHT YOU WERE GOING TO JUST FOCUS ON NARUTO'S TRAINING IN THE ANBU. THAT'S GOING TO START MAKING ME LIKE SASUKE AGAIN. IT'S NICE TO BRING HIM DOWN A PEG OR TWO. POOR SASUKE THOUGHT.
THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE. YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HAPPY I AM THAT YOUR PICKING UP THE STORY.
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i don't know why but i can't wait for sai to show up. i wonder how his pov is going to be like.
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY you updated. -happy dance- can't wait for the next one
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First let me say that I'm a HUGE fan of your work! I love how you take time to develop the story and the characters! ^^
Secondly, I love how you portray Itachi in this story. Normally, I’m not a fan of stories that imply and/or confirm that Itachi didn’t kill his clan; but I rather like this one! And Naruto calling him 'Itachi–sensei' is so cute! XD
Anyway, please update soon! I’m looking forward to reading more of this fabulous story!
Secondly, I love how you portray Itachi in this story. Normally, I’m not a fan of stories that imply and/or confirm that Itachi didn’t kill his clan; but I rather like this one! And Naruto calling him 'Itachi–sensei' is so cute! XD
Anyway, please update soon! I’m looking forward to reading more of this fabulous story!
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story.
Thanks for it.
Thanks for it.