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for Colourless Vanity

by Cepheus

schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this tale. Please don't wait so long to update again.
person Zrina
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the in depth views into everyone's thoughts and emotions. Can't wait to see what kind of butterfly Naruto becomes when he pulls himself out of his cocoon! And I love the fact that you are giving details in the training, it makes it very realistic and shows his growth. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another update. This made my day. Yea, it struck me as interesting how you are going through the training process so carefully. I feel like i'm taking ANBU 101 along with Naruto. Nice to see Sasuke is willing to do what it takes to mend his friendship with Naruto when he 'comes back', and Hyoo's thoughts were very true. Great job.
person Shinigami24
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* I would gladly pay to see Konohamaru and Co make trouble for Sasuke! Since he has it coming! i'm, peeved since Sasuke seems to have gotten away with attempted murder in canon! I have always wanted to see Naruto get some justice in the end! I KNOW Naruto wouldn't have told anyone that Sasuke tried to kill him in the Valley of the end, when Naruto tried to bring him back. I think Naruto's reaction was self-defense...He tried to reason with Sasuke but Sasuke refused to listen, so he had no choice but to go all out...Tsunade healed him, so she has to supect, but Naruto isn't the type to tell on his friends, EVEN if he should tell!
person wildkit
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You need to update asap
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHH it ended to sooon! but it was amazing i can't wait for the next chapter and to see what the evil kids will do to Sasuke
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*gives standing ovation* that was amazing and you aren't even fished yet... you have an amazing talent i can't wait for you to finish the story
person NexusW
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Argh, I love this story as well!

If you don't stop with the amazing plotlines and character developments I might be forced to kidnap you and use you for my own devices.

But seriously, you write the best ItaNaru stories EVER.

I feel like you know, dedicating a story in your honour, or something. Hell, I'll think of something to do!

Love

Nexus

And another thing, I'll make chapter ten a present for you since you loved it so much, and shamelessly advertise your story, since it's what I do. You inspired me to write another story. *shakes fist at you* More work, yay...
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it!! And can't wait for more ^^
person slytherinsexaddict
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY FREAKIN GAWD!!! YAY!!! you updated!! sooo excited!

Do it again! Do it again!

Good Luck!

(ps. where did ur story "Poisoned Lullaby" go? At least I'm
pretty sure it was urz..hmm)