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for Colourless Vanity

by Cepheus

person rAiNwAtEr
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and its paring. I can only wish you the best of luck with this story and hope that you update as soon as possible.

schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!! My favorite stories tend to be those that go down door number two, and this was no exception to the rule!!! Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading the next chapter. (Hopefully sooner than later!!)

<3
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how very happy am i that you decided to update this fic after your situation with the other one. I was wondering for the longest about this one. I love your Itachi/Naruto fics so much. At any rate, it didn't seem to me that Naruto was very OOC at all. I liked it! Lol, i don't blame him for reacting the way he did to Itachi "staring" at him. Great chap. Do update soon!
person Q
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I see no one has mentioned your awesome BETA... >.> *whistle*

Anyway, I decided to just drop my e-mail in various places hoping ONE link will work. :(

And also, grammar mistakes?? Where?! *failure ;_;*

~Q
person emp78
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Thank you for continuing it. Can't wait to see what Konohamaru and Co. do to Sasuke.
person nlb
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the wait was certainly worth it :-)

I love your character descriptions and the little insights you give into their personalities, like with Iruka's revenge on Sasuke or Itachi's feelings regarding his clan.

person lonelydove
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay, you finally updated!!! loved the chapter and cant wait for the next one.
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. i love itachi's teaching methods. total genius. the part with the showers was cute, i could so see naruto throwing the soap @ somebody for walking in and seeing him naked. and iruka idea of getting sasuke to teach konohamaru's class was pure brillance. oh, how he will suffer. lol. i'm eagerly looking foward to when naru's training with anko starts. anyway, always looking foward to your next update.

~Devious
person chineseartist
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm glad you decided to update this story. i can't wait to see what other adventures naruto has in ANBU, and how his training with Anko and Itachi goes. It should also be fun to see how Iruka tortures Sasuke with the Konohamaru Corps class that he has to teach. things are looking up. i am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah you update. Thank you so much. I can't wait to read what happen next and I hope you update "Winter Release." Until next time, take care, and god bless.