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I love this story. I'm so glad you updated. You're a really great writer. I love all your stories.
I think the pace is good. I like how you don't rush things. It gives everything more depth and meaning.
Great update. I can't wait to read more.

Yea!! Finally! I actually thought you gave up on this story but after seeing this new chapter I'm so happy to see you didn't. This story is unique in that certain characters teach the lessons by patiently going into the mechanics. Learning how things worked made the story and the Naruto world come to life. You seem to put a lot of thought in how a lot of these skills work so congratulations on a job well done. I have a feeling that the pace is going to be slow (like you mentioned) which is something I'm normally not fond of but you are able to somehow make it work wonderfully well with this story. I realize a faster pace will have to be sacrificed in order to better capture moments (such as Naruto's ninja lessons) with higher quality. This is especially important in writing anything with in-depth character development. Thanks for writing this and I look forward to any updates. This is by far my favorite out of all your stories!

I was thrilled to see a new chapter and it lived up to expectations. Konahamaru is going to make Sasuke's life pure hell. Can't WAIT. I like the training that you're doing with Naruto. You can see him both thinking and feeling. I will impatiently wait for the next chapter.

This is awesome!!!! I love how you've managed to make the emotions real and intense, both the sadness and the humour. I can't wait for you to update. Thank you.

I LOVED IT. i've been waiting so long for you to update. i'm glad you finally have

I really enjoyed this story so far. I cant wait for the next chapter.

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Hello again! Guess who? lol. I'm not sure if I like this fic quite as much as the others you've written, but it's still very interesting. I will await your update, and hope that you can find a good beta reader. Because as wonderful as all your stories are, there are simple little grammar errors that keep bugging me. You know my email already, so let me know if you want me to beta for you and/or when you update!

I just finished reading what you have of this fic and I have to say I am loving it. I think ItaNaru is a great pairing when Itachi isn't an evil bastard. Non-con just doesn't sit well with me and I hate that so many people write him as nothing BUT an evil bastard. Yes I realize that in the anime and whatnot, he's portrayed as such but really there are a lot of things that could've happened that would make it look as though Itachi killed his clan. Besides that, as you mentioned, when Itachi found Naruto in that hotel, he easily could've absconded the blond before Jiraiya came to the rescue and before Sasuke showed up. All that aside, I am totally one for exploring peoples character, hence my ShinoNaruShino fic. When you think about it, Itachi is one of those underdeveloped characters too. Yeah, he has craploads of mention (usually from Sasuke himself) but not a lot past that. I like what you've done with the fic and I can't wait to read another chapter.

By the way, thanks for your awesome review on 'Taking Advantage'.

i hope you continue your efforts with this story. it's off to a great start and i can only hope that it continues to have quality chapters. keep up the good work and i hope you update soon!