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After reading the A/N at the bottom of Chapter 5, I seriously considered posting a review to tell you I would forever hate you if Raido started eating pizza and saying "cowabunga". I know, wrong turtle, but still. Oh, and I have that stupid song stuck in my head. "Heroes on the half-shell ..." DAMN!

Oh, and by the way, this story rocks! I really like the idea behind the plot, and it's interesting to look at things from the ANBU perspective. There dedication in your story to the Sandaime and the Yondaime makes me tear up (since it's not manly to cry, unless you're Lee or Guy). Thank you for this story!


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I love and worship you...but you need a beta. The little bloops are not really distracting; you just seem to mix past and prestent tences and 1st, 2nd and 3rd person sometimes. Like I said, they don't take away from the story, but they're noticable (at least to a grammar nazi like me).
I would love to do it. I would be on cloud nine. But, Alas! I am unknown and don't even have an account (woe is me).
Whatever you decide to do though, I will still love and worship you.

PS. If you already have a beta and I didn't notice..Did not mean to insult! um, um.. (crawls in hole)

I really love this story. I don't care how long it takes to finish it; I'll read every time you update. I like the idea of Naruto in ANBU, and all of them liking him. Also, the part about Itachi having been on a Mission when he was in Akatsuki. This isn't the only story of yours I like; I've read all of them that you have posted. You don't write the same theme over and over like some people do. I don't review very often, but occasionally when I really enjoy the story, I just have to let the author know. ^.^

yay..you finally updated!!!! I'm so happy ^_^ I love this story.....update again hehe

Wow, it seemed like i was waiting for this forever! When i clicked over after reading another fic and saw this up i literally said "Yes!" lol. Anyway, that was another good chap. Yes, i do believe it is a wise move to have a gradual build up with this NarutoxItachi relationship. Itachi is a hard charcter to devise and penetrate, him falling head over heels in 2 chaps is unlikely to me. I just can't wait to see when it starts happening. Nice thing there with Kakashi and Iruka as well. It's funny, i always felt that Iruka isn't as oblivious or weak as he tends to come across and you are writing it rather nicely. I hope he gives Sasuke hell lol. Update soon, ok!!!!

*the crowd goes wild!* (Claps enthusiastically) Lovely, bloody lovely! Keep working hard - and I hope you update soon... Or rather, whenever u have the free time to. Don't be pressured, otherwise it'll come out wrong okay? I loved it a lot.

Wow, this story is getting better and better each time you update it! I'm sorry that people pressure you about updating, it sucks. Good luck with your stuff, and I'll be waiting for your next update

loved it. three of my favorite pairs. Genma fleeing from Anko was hysterical!! I love the psycho. Can't wait to see more. I like to see inside the Anbu as people. Can't wait to see more of them. And I'm REALLY curious about how Naruto will react to the village or a better way to say it, how the village will react to the Anbu. Are you going to have him encounter any of his friends? What's Iruka going to do to poor Sasuke? I know unleash the Kohanamaru Corps on him. That should be more than enough punishment.
Don't worry while slow can be agraviting in the extreme while you wait for a story to unfold, it's almost always best in the end. I'll try to be patient and good luck with the studies.

I really like this update. Somewhat I'm excited to read on more of your story... I'm just like that. :D Can't wait for a next update.

Awesome story so far I hope you keep up with it!

No one likes an incomplete story.

*gives a cookie*

~VIVA*LA*SMUT~