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January 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Are you still there?? I'm really sad that I havebt heard from you in such a long time :( But I'm still keeping my hope up that there will be another chappy!!! To encourage you to update soon I will tell you everything I like so much about this story!!! Maybe if you see how much I love this you will feel obliged to update *wishing upon a star*
I really like the way you pace this story it is not as hurryed as most other storys. You really take your time with the plot and I love that, it gived the story more depth. It is not so important for me that we get fast to the smexx I rather want to lose myself in your storytelling and that is something you acomplish perfectly. I find it fascinating how much you think about hte charakters and their feelings and motivations, that is something not many authors do^^ And with the whole Anbu training you show how much knowledge you have about the narutoverse and I find that really amazing. And then the small tidbits about politics you put in there shows how much you think about everything that happens in you story!!! All in all I can say that this story is worth publishing!!! Not many authors can work so well with words and give the story such a great pace as you do. If some people think you are to slow don't let it bother you!! They are simply not used to this magnitude of storytelling you are doing. It is not often found this way in the naruto fandome or any fanfiction fandome cause the storys are not normally this long. Not that I mind I love epic and long storys and yours falls into both categorys!!!
Now I really hope this review is long enough to encourage you to update^^ I really hope to hear from you again when you are ready!!!!
I really like the way you pace this story it is not as hurryed as most other storys. You really take your time with the plot and I love that, it gived the story more depth. It is not so important for me that we get fast to the smexx I rather want to lose myself in your storytelling and that is something you acomplish perfectly. I find it fascinating how much you think about hte charakters and their feelings and motivations, that is something not many authors do^^ And with the whole Anbu training you show how much knowledge you have about the narutoverse and I find that really amazing. And then the small tidbits about politics you put in there shows how much you think about everything that happens in you story!!! All in all I can say that this story is worth publishing!!! Not many authors can work so well with words and give the story such a great pace as you do. If some people think you are to slow don't let it bother you!! They are simply not used to this magnitude of storytelling you are doing. It is not often found this way in the naruto fandome or any fanfiction fandome cause the storys are not normally this long. Not that I mind I love epic and long storys and yours falls into both categorys!!!
Now I really hope this review is long enough to encourage you to update^^ I really hope to hear from you again when you are ready!!!!
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September 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Its been a while since I was in the mood for a good Naruto fic... So of course I came to you to reread some of my favorites! ^_^ You have no clue how happy I was to find that you had updated Colourless Vanity! And with a chapter that has Gaara in it too! (Gaara's my 2nd favorite character in Naruto so I was thrilled to see him) Loved the seen of Naruto & Gaara interacting and Naruto telling him he could use his first name cause they were friends. Made me want to run up to Gaara and give him a big hug. Also the way you discribed naruto trying to practice while being quite made me giggle. Very well done.
I hope you update again soon! PLEASE?!! I promise more (and this time, timely) reviews!!!
I hope you update again soon! PLEASE?!! I promise more (and this time, timely) reviews!!!
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September 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I just wanted you to know and ask if there will be anymore updates for this? If not, i will be sad but i can understand.
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July 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me you didn't abandon this story!!!! I'm beggin you to continue!!! This is by far my favorite story!!!! Please!!! Or write me an mail when you will continue ( my mail address is kuraitenschi@web.de
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March 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Do you still continue this?? I really hope so because I really adore this story!!!! I hope you will pick up posting this story!!! Please update soon!!!!
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March 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I find the story pace agonizingly slow and there hasn't been any real progress with Ita and Naru's relationship, but guess I can deal with it because I like the direction the story is going. It has a good plot and I like how you go into great detail in your descriptions. They are very informative.
So I hope you update soon!!
xoxo
Mj
So I hope you update soon!!
xoxo
Mj
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November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You havn't abandoned this story, have you? I really hope not because I just can' t wait to read more about this fantastic story!!!! I really hope that you will update again!!!! See you!!!!
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October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to continue this story? I really hope so because i totally love it!!! Please send me an email when you update kuraitenschi@web.de
Thanks a lot!!!! Hope to see you soon!!!
Thanks a lot!!!! Hope to see you soon!!!
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May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay!!!!!!!!!! an update!!! soooo happy!!!! i love the way the story is progressing and naruto's interactions with the rest of his team. i love this story and am looking forward to the next update. thanks!! ^_^
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May 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story!! I think, I remember reading it a couple of years ago and when the updates stopped I was pretty bummed out about it. I always enjoy reading a good naruto story, especially when it will contain a relationship between itachi and naruto. It is intriguing to read about how much Naruto is maturing and learning just from joining the ANBU. I'm excited for the next update! I'm pretty curious about which animal naruto will choose and what his 'code' name will become.