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for Colourless Vanity

by Cepheus

person lotrhpfan
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!

you really have to get the next chapter out asap!!!!!!!!!

i fell in love with this story. poor itachi :( !!!!!!!! ah, i love the last thought of Hyoo *subtle foreboding* lol.

can't wait for the next one, really!!!!

lol. naruto and training with itachi. and he called him sensei!!! *giggle*

this is just awesome.

you. must. write. the. next. one. now. XD please?
person Avid Fan
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay I have some things to say

YOu need to finish
THis is the best Naruto fic I have ever read
THats saying something since I have almost read all of the interesting fics that make up about 3 to 4 sites
Not sure if that is much but my friends say I line in a hole, cause I read too much
It would be wonderful if you would finish, just don't abandon this fic, PLEASE!!!!!!
OKay I'mm done ranting, now start working*Mother-Hen mode*
person Fangbaby2002
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. I love this story. Youve written it very well. I cant wait to see what happens next.
person MeMe
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good job i like your whole point of story...
i wounder if itachi could be still on mission for ANBU.
i mean it makes sense way you wrote it ^^
anyway thank you for your hard work and i can't wait for the next one...
keep up the good work.
person sam
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hiya! can you pleeeease continue the story affective desire?_? i liked it and i don't know why you stopped!
person Anna
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow you updated!
I was starting to plan a search party for you.
Anyway, I love this chapter!
Itachi's training... he's been mean to Naruto, but it is for his own good. ^^
person Hello
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story... can't wait for next update. :)
person AnA La PaNa83
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man, i was waiting for this chapter foreeeever!! Anyway, it was worth the wait. So Itachi is acting as Naruto's sensei of sorts...that is interesting lol. Poor Naruto. Though it does make sense to me. Whereas Kakashi and Jiraiya lost thier patience over teaching him the basics, now that a real sadist has come to teach him, he'll learn effectively i think lol. So i'm guessing there will be an interesting amount of interaction between them during this, which is damn fine by me. Nice job on the seal invention too! Well researched. I wonder though, hopefully if Naruto passes the test and he becomes Anbu, how the hell are they gonna hide that blond hair of his? I mean there aren't too many male blonds around. Anyway, it's nice to see that in his own bastard way Sasuke misses Naruto. The feelings in this story are gonna be overflowing i'm sure and i can't wait. Now, get to writing so you can update soon!
person ZeldaFitz
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I can see you are working up to some interesting confrontations in the future as well as developing relationships. I like your look into Itachi. I'm especially looking forward to more Iruka and Raidou, they're both wonderful with Naruto. Are you going to tell us (eventually) who Hyoo is? I can wait. Thanks for the update.
person LonelyDove89
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE!!! i loooove this story ^_^