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for Colourless Vanity

by Cepheus

person LonelyDove89
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!! i need to read this!! i love it so far and you have yet to update
person yumemi
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY REALLY REALLLY want to see more of this!! i love your characterization. It is pretty realistic and IC; Itachi and his story etc,. Especially regarding Sasuke being weak. and i love the idea of Iruka-sensei and Randou(sp)

Keep up the good work!! (and updates!!) ^__^
person kiss_me_deadly
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is a completely new take on the Itachi saga, one I've never seen before. You managed to tie up every loose end. I love it. Wish I had thought of it.
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really great and original even if this theme was treated again and again.
I can't wait to see Kakashis reaction from Iruka being an ANBU and what relationship Naruto and Itachi will have !
Hope you will update soon !!! ^^
person dace
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME! OMG if it was a novel I would so buy it! cant wait for more!!!!!!
person Kiba
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great. I haven'r read manga, but I'm eagerly waiting for Itachi to appear in TV. Actually You made it so smooth that I even suspected that Itachi really didn't betray Konoha. But again, he hurted Sasuke so much. When are you going to update?
person Sploooooooooooooosh
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!
person Sm
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has to be one of the most thought out ideas I have ever seen.
If it wasn't then, who cares? Your writing is amazing, and this is
the most original idea I have seen in a long time.
person Rez
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There you are!! I hadn't bookmarked the fic and couldn't, for the life of me, remember what the title was. Here we are though...yay!

Aww, what an emotional upheaval this was. Poor Itachi, poor Naruto...poor poor Naruto. To think you are sticking him with Anko as his teacher. *shudders* Poor kid. Oh well, her "in your face" style will surely help Naruto get to the level he needs in order to become an Anbu. Afterall, she's more into action than words, which is just Naruto's style. Hehe, can't wait.

And hey, what's going to happen now with Sasuke. Eventually he's gonna be confronted again by Oto nins, right? If that happens, then what? Is he going to follow Orochimaru? Or is he going to hang around Konoha for a bit longer. Oh goodness, and what will happen if Itachi's Akatsuki cape is found. Worse yet, if Sasuke finds out that Itachi isn't in Akatsuki anymore. I think he'd go stir crazy trying to find him. That's no good. Oh well.

Can't wait for the next chappie to come out....wee. Keep typin'
person tortilla lady
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter!!!!! i really like where this story is progressing! please update soon!!